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ArkKane


Prepare for the power of Dark Arts

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Eh... could use a bit of work.

You could place the explanation of what kinda dwarf Orgnar is in an authors note:applejackunsure:

I demand more, also is wrong to say I picture organ as honeydew from the yogscast

You know I have a feeling that orgran and starburst first meeting is going to have a lot of yelling and axes baring thrown

8142458 sorry to disappoint, but it's not, though in the story they will butt heads.

Everyone has diabetes in magical horse land:pinkiehappy:

Hmm.... i wonder what our dwarf friend is planning:pinkiecrazy:

Upvoted for the title :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Edit: Upvoted for the titleS (Expanded to include the chapter titles! Now with extra drunk dwarf!)

Comment posted by Superblox deleted May 12th, 2017

Yes, this is the best displaced i have ever seen.

8142929 For your first story, it's pretty well done, a little short, BUT STILL! Pretty good.

8158964 I wasn't the only one who thought of that! This is the best!

Is Orgran a real name? That is his name before he came to Equestria, right?

Eh. Could use a little more explanation. Like how the hell did Orgran know that his friend was the one who arrived?:rainbowhuh:

It's a bit of a problem since i don't recall Orgran and his friend being displaced at the same time by the same merchant at the same con:unsuresweetie:

8159227 it's stated that Orgran in his human life as Ark wrote stories with Raven, Orgran is a fictional character for said stories.

8160111 doth thou not read the dog tag in chapter 4?

8159005 thanks, I'm actually just wanting to have each chapter around a thousand words so I don't burn out on them too quickly.

*giggles madly*

:pinkiecrazy:Hhehehehehehehehehehhehehehehehehhhheeeeeeee....

Dat Merchant got owned:pinkiecrazy:

“What!?” the tit replied. “You again!? I’ll send you to King Dainn as a mare for-AAAGH!!!” he doubles over in pain. “Wh… what is the meaning of this!?”

Hang on a moment....

I’ll send you to King Dainn as a mare for-

send you to King Dainn

King Dainn

Oh. My. God. My dearest merchent, can you tell me WHAT IN THE ACTUAL FUCK IS WRONG WITH THIS FUCKING SENTENCE!?!?!?!? KING DAINN CAN GO CHOKE ON HIS OWN DICK FOR ALL I CARE ABOUT HIM!!!!

8195397 You have no idea how much i hate that name. If you don't, then read any sort of Fall of Equestria fic, then you'll understand.

8195672 um... that was kind of the point of the threat he was making. if anyone knew what that name meant, that threat would be worse than a death sentence.

Have i ever said that i like this dwarf?:rainbowlaugh:

I love wolves; so a timberwolf that is larger than the regular ones, is practically tamed, and is Orgran's very own mount! I love this story even more.
Also, HOORAY FOR TOP 5 FIRST COMMENTS!

You cheeky bastard

“Raven? Is that you, ya crazy bastard!?” he mirthfully chuckles.
“A father and in the flesh!”

That's a weird response...
Was that on purpose?

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this shephard displaced belongs to Raven-187, He’s trying to get the story off the ground, to make the chapter work we collaborated on this chapter.

...I closed the book immediately after I saw the heading ‘Breeding with your Timberwolf.’

This sounds like an awkward way to get splinters.:raritydespair:

fuking ‘ell, i wished that you didn’t bring them into it. Well, at least i can say this, PINE THE GREAT TIMBERWOLF IS COMING SOON!

Ahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahaha!!! I love it already!! The way he dealt with it!! All of it!!! Ooohhhhhooohohohoohoh!! This is gonna be fun!!!

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Mwaaahaahhaahhaahahhahahahahahahahahaha!!!!:pinkiecrazy:

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But both got an interesting permanent deal out of it!!!

I like the way you dealt with that!! I hope to see "that" crossover soon!!!

I would love to to see Orgran chalange the princesses to a drinking contest. Also I found the perfect song for this story https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Aovi-kEpui4

I didn't even started to read it but i alredy leave a like for that title:moustache:

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hmm... I don't think it fits Orgran really, he's more of a guy who'd go for EPIC music, something that gets him in the mood for having fun his own way or something he'd listen to while jumping into Tartarus to fight Hades himself.

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