Michael Thorson is a promising young physicist working in the experimental transportation department at Black Moon Laboratories. One day he makes a fateful decision to start on a new exploration project that opens a gateway to a strange world rich in many kinds of valuable materials. Black Moon immediately attempts conquer this place and seize the precious materials, but Michael has developed a sense of belonging in this new land. Will he assist his new friends by using his knowledge of technology to defend their home? Or will he stay loyal to his own kind?
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This is my first fanfic and I appreciate any feedback, good or bad, you feel like giving. Hope you like it!
Chapters (8)
wow...nice story dude
I'll keep my eye on this one
A well earned like and favorite for you. t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRaOLsl9pHLiUJDEn0SIDbbGbzI8iJVXYXJndccNOe0wFDIxn5fHg
Awesome ending the chapters the same way! No downvotes for you! /fireworks phase into an oil refinery, everyone dies. That's what it would be if it was grimdark.
I so wish! I so wish!
Hey, this looks pretty well written! Wait a second, though... hmmm... this plot looks eerily familiar. Does it look familiar at all to you, Neytiri?
Eeeenope.
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Huh... must be my imagination, then.
884993 Heh heh yeah... I like that kind of story though so I just had to write one.
Wow, I'm shocked at the response this is getting! I most definitely need to start working on the next chapters for you guys, sounds like you want them. I'm honored that you all appreciate my first work.
I hope to get the next chapter or two up by the end of the week.
Fantastic story is fantastic. WE WANT MOAR!
The best method of transferring images to a computer would be via a scanner. If that's not possible, a mounted camera in a properly lit condition would work. I'd recommend researching tutorials/walkthroughs on how to do this properly.
Places to upload include deviantArt.com or one of the MLP image boards.
902439 Thanks for the tips! I'll try using a scanner next time, or at least a better camera than the one I was using. I really should make an account on deviantart
wow...so far you've done pretty good
903054 Thaaaanks
Aww man... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_gasp.png
I'll be keeping tabs on it in case you do decide to continue.
Oh, well, I-uuuhhh... *sigh* I suppose I will give it another shot. Does anyone have any suggestions to progress the story? I'm in a bit of a block at the moment, not sure where to take the pony side of the story. Mike's side is much easier to write, but I have no idea where to take the ponies.
we are following it. it's just that you haven't posted up newer chapters as of late
2216459 Yepperoo!
Whoa, is anyone else getting white text on a gray background? Or is that just me...
2217757 Oh, so that's what that does.
YES!! you hve a newer chapter!!
i'm dying to know what would happen next 
2219027 Don't you worry, I'll try to put out as much as I can for you while I have the urge to write.
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The big block is school though, 4 AP classes and Spanish 4 can out a lot of stress on a person (especially if one of them is Calculus
2219654 understandable
i mean, i have a lot of stuff to do as well 