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Unwhole Hole


Digging it deeper. Always deeper.

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Shadow Bloodfang- -a red and black, batwinged, heterochromic, three-honred alicorn- -goes to Ponyville.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 11 )

I didn't read anything yet, but I can expect two things.
1- An ironical comedic masterpiece about really bad gary stu OCs
2- A metaphorical punch in the face with no irony and a very annoying gary stu bad OC

The ending there was random... Like me:pinkiecrazy:

While it takes a while to hit its groove this was actually pretty good; it subverted my expectations and contained some excellent humour.

a different take on the black and red Alicorn stories. you did give me some rather Good Humor though.

Good story and curious final, it make me think a little of the typical reaction to Black People around the middle of XX Century... But I for one could like more a Final B that I imagined... Celestia and Luna appearing and sending all Ponyville to kindergarten for being racists. Why should S.B hide who he is?

Pinkie playing the long game at the end lmao

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