This story is a sequel to The Lost Changeling
One hundred and sixty moons prior, Carve had moved in with Rusty Flashlight. The two of them, along with Pane Fall, have explored far and wide throughout Equestria. However, three days before Nightmare Night, Carve pays a visit to Rolling Acres, a visit that she will never forget, especially when on said holiday, she is told of a parallel she needs to help undo for Chrysalis.
(Reading The Lost Changeling is heavily advised in order to understand this story.)
(This story is written with regards to recent events within Rolling Acres.)
Chapters (23)
Good to see the sequel's up so soon after the first story.
8137740 Because of recent events, I kind of needed to make a sequel to The Lost Changeling.
8137746 What kind of "recent events"?
8137777 Let's just say Chapter 1 will kind of largely hint at that. The prologue takes place two nights before said event.
This is starting off pretty interesting...
8138763 Thank you.
8138763 Excluding the three weeks Rusty waited, do you think he'd been to Rolling Acres before? I found an interesting quote I did not think much of until I pondered the possibility.
I really like the way this story is being built up. Nice work.
8172844 Thanks.
Whoa. I am really looking forward to the next chapter...
8193033 Trust me; I'm looking forward to how this will play out too. I bet there will be some hilarious moments.
So far, so good. Let's see how long they can keep up the charade...
8197693 Hmm... the story description seems a little outdated to me. Maybe on Chapter 10, I'll update the description. But hey, who knows. I might even give Rusty and Pane some read time soon. I really hope Chapter 10 writes ahead of schedule like this chapter did.
8197756 I'll keep my fingers crossed.
A new complication. Let's see how Carve deals with this...
The plot is thickening by the chapter. Keep it up.
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I really liked the way Chapter 13 came out.
8223477 It was pretty good. And funny how Aita was annoyed at all the chanting.
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I especially like the end of the chapter.
8223493 It was a sweet way to end things.
That's quite the compelling argument...
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Thanks. Before Chapter 16, did you ever suspect that this would ever happen to Correal?
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Can't say that I did, to be honest.
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Also, personally, when it comes to Thorax vs Chrysalis as ruler, I have no real preference, so it tends to be pretty easy to find a viewpoint on the matter with really any character.
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That does make me wonder what the ultimate outcome will be...
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Well, I write on the fly, so I don't know just yet how I'm going to end the sequel. But wow, the editing after I finish a chapter is extremely tedious when porting the chapters onto FIMFiction.
Now this is interesting. I didn't expect such a major event to happen "off-screen".
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Actually, remember when there was shouting the background, followed by cheering, at the hive?
8234499 Fair enough. But it is a tad unconventional, not focusing too heavily on it.
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Eh, it was played for laughs. I might make an in-depth one shot on the whole overthrowing Thorax thing. That is if I manage to start it before a certain new episode coming up soon. Also I started finding it hard to write for the recoronation, but I love the end result.
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Also, did you notice something about the most significant roles in the story?
8236358 How do you mean?
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Rusty, Aita, Carve, Pane, Chrysalis, and Carina. They are the most significantly featured in this story.
8236524 Ah, right. Is it how close they're becoming?
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Actually, there's a mythology gag surrounding the listed characters.
8236579 What is it?
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It's a reference the main characters' group nickname in the original MLPFIM.
8236669 The Mane Six?
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Yup.
This was a great story, and fun to read. Nice work.
Thanks. I just finished the picture to the story.
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Chapter 19... again... that flashback...
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Yeah, that was an interesting little detour.
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Also, I loved the way I wrote the recoronation.
8239583 Me too.
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Which entry of The Lost Changeling do you think held up better? This or the original?
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Throughout the story, I actually started needing my Lingo translator less and less as I progressed. What words do you know in Lingo so far?
8240511 Not many. Just ones like "eldeyen".
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I've memorized Greta, Lomenalada, Lorinehicez, Mono, Mone and Tehinterin in terms of words. I also memorized a few phrases.
Le cono
Nuta le mona?
Ni osia
Ve/vo sem
8240756 Maybe you could make a post translating some of the more recurring words.