The idea is good, but the execution is blah.

The description alone is just a slew of words hastily strung together, please edit your stories before publishing them. Based on first impressions, this isn't a good start.

Twilight was nowhere to be found.
There was no conflict about wanting to get out of the contract.
I feel like the description lied to me, and that hurts.
5/10 good enough story, try better next time, not a re-read.

Dude, you really, really REALLY need an editor

Short and long descriptions need the character's names capitalized. If you aren't going to get that right, I don't think it is worth my while looking deeper.

The setup of this story seems more than just a one shot
...............Now if it was of him running away while gilda in a wedding dress chasing him................
Is that legal
I'm looking OKAY

8132939 Too bad this dreck has no Twilight and co. to settle the imaginary-at-best conflict.

All issues I have are already addressed by previous commenters.

8133132 Agreed. Wonder if anyone's told OP it's time to stop yet, before he rushes himself into the pits of downvote obscurity.

I'd explain my down-vote, but it's already been stated.

If a male beats a griffines then not breed with her it means that the males just wanted a trophy to saw off

I think you mean Show off

She looked at me and for a second she just looked at me and then in a slip second she jumped at me and wrapped her arms around me.

"Split" second

So unlike most people here it seems I actually liked it
But it does sound like there is more to it and not just a one shot
should totally add more hint hint nudge nudge wink wink cough cough

It looks like this story need a lot of grammatical corrections, it might be a good idea for you to get a proofreader (and maybe download a program like Grammarly for some extra help).

When she laid down I moved back down and pulled her panties down.

You used "Down" way to many times here.

male dragon it born with two

To be

It's a fun read, but it's peppered with grammatical errors, mostly missing commas and the wrong version of some words. Now that I have that all out of the way, maybe you could redo the story, and make it longer as well. I don't know about everyone else, but for me, one-shot stories always feel a bit rushed, a story like this should take its time. Rewriting the story could be an opportunity, by making it a small handful of chapters you could expand on some stuff, maybe even show the incident in question that resulted in Gilda living with Spike. The story has potential, but there are just some things that make it feel like it might still lack completion.

As an early piece, this story is okay, but it's just lacking all around. As I said before, I would love to see a reworked version of this story. Have a program like Grammarly to help with those little errors, maybe get a proofreader to spot some of those little hiccups and practice some self-editing techniques to make it better. The story probably would have better execution if it had a small handful of chapters rather than a single one. I'm not saying that one-shots don't work, there are plenty of examples that they can and do. I'm saying this story doesn't quite work as a one-shot.

8131767 agreed, it also looks like it might have been rushed.

You should have more chapters to see how this couple blossom.

I would like to see where this goes

I enjoyed it look forward to seeing where it goes

Progress on next chapter?

Neat idea, poor grammar and sentence structure.