Elements Of Harmony: Next Generation

by YellowHornBrony

Elements of Harmony: Next Generation

“Princess Luna!” I said, running through the door into the castle, “What is it?!”

“Silver, I need to tell you something” She said.

“What is it?” I asked.

“I’m sending you back to Ponyville” She said.

“Buck no!” I yelled.

“You education will continue there,” She said, “There are things I cannot teach you that you must learn.”

“Okay” I said. I couldn’t beat her. She was as stubborn as a mule.

“Silver, I hope you understand,” She said, “I have taught you everything I can.”

“Goodbye” I said. I lit up my horn and readied myself for teleportation. With a quick flash and a loud bang, I was back in Ponyville.

“Oh my Celestia!” A pony said, “It’s Silver Blast!”

“Silver Blast!” Another pony said.

“Silver!” A voice yelled. It was my brother, Golden Badge. He hugged me. I used my magic to take him off me.

“Not now,” I said, “I have to get to the nearest library.”

“You mean the Golden Oak?” He asked.

“No, that’s destroyed” I said.

“Actually, Princess Twilight rebuilt it for her student Starlight Glimmer” He said.

“Really?” I asked, “Where is it?”

“Look behind you” He said.

I turned around. I saw a brand new Golden Oak library.

“Oh my Celestia!” I said.

“It’s amazing isn’t it?” He asked.

“I’ll be back” I said running inside.

“Yes?” A pink unicorn asked, “Silver!?”

“Hi, Starlight,” I said, “Hey, I need a book on Princess Celestia’s turn to evil.”

“I got about 3 shelved,” She said, “Which one do you want?”

“The one that explains how she was trapped and what would happen if she escaped” I said.

“Hey, where did you go?” She asked.

“I went back to Canterlot to study magic” I said.

“You know Ponyville hasn’t been the same without you” She said.

“I can tell” I said.

“Silver!” I heard my brother call from outside.

“See ya” I said.

“See ya” She said.

I walked out the door.

“Silver, hurry up!” My brother said.

“Golden, how’s the team?” I asked.

“The team only has five members left” He said.

“What!?” I asked.

“Some of your friends quit” He said.

“Who’s left?” I asked.

“Snow Storm, me, the twins, and Energon” He said.

“You need your leader back?” I asked.

“That’s why they left,” He said, “They quit because you quit.”

“Well I’m coming back” I said.

“Yes!” A voice said. I turned around and saw 4 pegasi. I saw the twins, Metal Thunder and Grass Mercenary, I saw my best friend, Energon, and I saw Snow Storm.

“Guys!” I said happily.

“Silver, you’re coming back?” They asked.

“Duh” I said.

“Wait, why did you quit?” Energon asked.

“A bad break up” I said embarrassingly.

“Bro” He said.

“Loser!” Grass Mercenary said.

“Dude,” Metal Thunder said, “You suck.”

“Help!” A voice could be heard. I opened my saddlebags and pulled out a yellow suit.

“You kept that?” My brother asked.

“Yeah” I said, putting it on. I zipped up my zipper.

“Alright then,” My brother said, “Watch this.”

My brother’s body lit up into flames. The flames dissipated, and my brother took a step. My brother had a new suit. Snow Storm froze his body. The ice broke and Andrew had a new suit. Metal encased his body in metal, punched through it and stepped out. He had a new suit as well. Grass Mercenary forced the grass to grow around him. He cut through the grass with his grass blade and stepped out with, of course, a new suit. Energon literally exploded with energy and appeared in a new suit.

“Mother of Celestia!” I said.

“Let’s do this” My brother said. They all took off to the castle, where the sound was heard. I followed them.

“Nice suits” I said.

“They took a lot of work to create” Golden said.

“Yeah, but you’re not the only one who’s changed,” I said, “I’ve actually mastered unicorn magic, and know an alicorn level spell.”

“Holy hay!” He said, “That’s pretty cool.”

“Help!” The voice yelled again. This time I could recognize the voice. It was Princess Twilight.

“HAHAHA!” A voice laughed. I looked down and saw…

“Is that…” My brother said.

“Sweet Celestia, there’s no way that’s…” Energon said.

“Buck it’s…” I began.

` “Burning Nova!” We all said.

“Run, Twilight, run!” I yelled.

“And what do we have here?” Burning Nova asked.

“Boys, run!” Twilight said, “Go get the Elements of Harmony!”

Burning Nova fired a beam at Twilight. Twilight disappeared into thin air.

“No!” I yelled.

“Huh, what’s going on?” A voice asked from the window.

“Hello, Trixie” Burning Nova said.

“Aww, BUCK!” Trixie yelled

“Run!” I yelled.

Trixie teleported away. I used my magic to see where she went. She ran off to Canterlot.

“Guys, let’s go” I said.

“Where?” They asked.

“The Tree of Harmony” I said.

“And who says you get to lead?” Energon asked.

“Because, I’m the rightful leader!” I said.

“He does have a point” Golden said.

“And remember, I’m the most powerful” I said.

“Shut up” Energon said.

“Let’s go” I said.

We walked off to the Everfree forest. Everyone stayed quiet until we made it to the entrance to the forest.

“Um…” My brother said, “Are you sure we should do this?”

“Stop being a pansy,” I said, “It’s just a forest.”

“Buck off” He said.

“Last one to the cave is a rotten egg!” Snow Storm said.

We all made a mad dash through the forest. I tripped over a rock and fell over a cliff. I broke my hoof on the way down, and broke my nose at the bottom.

“Silver!” My brother called out, “Are you okay?!”

“Are you bucking retarded?!” I asked, “Of course I’m okay!”

“We’ll find another way down!” He said.

“Just jump!” I said, “4 of you are a pegasi, and you can teleport!”

“Oh yeah!” He said. They jumped down. My brother landed face first, breaking his nose, skull, and neck. The other four used their wings to slow themselves down.

“Guys, here we bucking are” I said.

“Have you noticed how much Silver’s been cussing lately?” Energon asked my brother.

“Yeah, he’s definitely changed,” Golden told him, “I wonder when the last time he cleared his mind of darkness.”

“Shut up!” I said, “I don’t want you guys talking about me behind your back!”

“Yeah. he needs to clear his mind of darkness” My brother said.

“Guys, hurry up!” Snow said.

“Snow, wait!” I said.

“What?” He asked. He turned around. The Element of Kindness flew at him and stopped in front of him. The crystal changed to the shape of a snowflake. The crystal sprouted a golden hoofband that wrapped around his hoof. The other five Elements did the same thing with each of us. My brother got Honesty, Metal got Generosity, Grass got Laughter, and Energon got Loyalty. Finally the last Element, the Element of Magic, flew at me at created a hoofband and wrapped around my hoof.

“Oh my Celestia!” I said.

“Well, lookie here,” A voice said, “Look’s like we got six new Elements of Harmony.”

“Discord…” I said.

“Hello, Silver” He said.

“Discord, what do you want?” I asked.

“The same thing as you,” He said, “I want to stop Burning Nova.”

“Why?” I asked.

“Because she has Fluttershy” His tone changed to an angry one.

“Then let’s go stop her” I said.

“Oh, I can’t stop her,” He said, “Now that you have the Elements, you have to.”

“Buck” I said.

“Wait, do you even know how to use them?” He asked.

“Definitely,” I said, “not.”

“Aww, buck,” He said, “Well we don’t have time for this so we’re just going to have to go to Canterlot.”

“How?’ I asked.

“Do you know nothing?!” He yelled, “You’re dad is half Draconequus, and I am a full blood!”

“What the buck!?” I said.

“You’re dad never told you?!” He said.

“Hay naw” I said.

“Of course he didn’t” He said.

“So, I’m part Draconequus, part changeling, and a unicorn?” I asked.

“Yeah” He said.

“Goodbye” I said. I took my brother’s gun, put it up to my head, and pulled the trigger.

“Welp, he’s gone” Discord said.

“Nope,” I said, “Can’t bucking die.”

“Buck” He said.

“Let’s just go” I said.

“Not without the proper training!” He said.

“Sorry!” I said, “Now, if I’m a draconequus , I should be able to teleport to Canterlot with ease.”

“Um, what about us?” Energon asked.

“Oh, you too” I said.

“Buck” Golden said.

“What?” Energon asked.

“Last time he did this, we ended up with broken bones” Golden said.

“Wait, what?!” Snow asked.

“Now!” I yelled. I teleported all of us from Canterlot with a flash and a loud bang.

“Silver!” My brother yelled.

“What?” I asked.

“You’re bucking crazy” He said.

“Look!” Energon said, ‘It’s Princess Luna!”

“Really, you’ve never met her?” I asked.

“Hello, SIlver,” Princess Luna said, “What brings you back here?”

“It’s Burning Nova she’s back,” I said, “But, I wouldn’t be here if the Elements of Harmony hadn’t attached to each of our hooves.”

“Wait, what?!” She asked, “You’re the next bearers of the Elements of Harmony!?”

“Yeah,” I said, “Also , I’m part Draconequus.”

“That explains a lot” She said.

“Yep” I said.

BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!

“Open up!” A voice yelled. Burning Nova, most likely.

“Hold her back, until I can get Princess Luna to the stora-” Princess Luna interrupted me.

“No, Silver, I will help you” She said.

“GET DOWN UNDER THAT BUNKER NOW!” I yelled.

“Damn” Energon said.

“You will not yell at your mentor/princess like that!” She yelled.

“I wouldn’t be in this situation if you hadn’t sent me back to Ponyville!” I yelled.

“Guys, we can’t hold this door for much longer!” Golden yelled.

“I am sick of this shit!” I yelled, “How much more bullshit is there gonna happen to me!? What else am I!? This is horsehay!”

“Huh, what’s going on?” A voice asked. Trixie walked into the throne room.

“Trixie, sweetie, go hide” Luna said.

CRASH! The door shattered. Burning Nova stepped through the remnants of the door.

“Hello, sister” Burning Nova said.

“Aww, BUCK!” Trixie yelled.

“Guys, put our hoofs together in team cheering formation” I said.

I put my hand in first. Then Snow. He did it reluctantly. Energon did it with pride, Golden just did it, Metal did it with power, and Grass did it not caringly. Our Elements began to light up. A rainbow shot out of them, hitting Burning Nova. Her armor fell to pieces, and her mane changed back to it’s classic pink.

“Luna…” She began.

“Sister!” Luna said, hugging her sister.

“I’m sorry,” Celestia said, “I don’t know what came over me.”

“It was this” I said, picking up a crystal.

“Another crystal?” Luna asked.

“No, the seventh Element of DISHarmony, or should I say Seven Deadly Sins, the Sin of Greed” I said.

“Do you know of any other?” Celestia asked.

“Yes,” I said, “The Alicorn Amulet, the Sin of Pride.”

“Anything else?” She asked.

“The Sirens amulet’s, the Sin of Envy” I said.

“What about lust?” A voice asked.

“Twilight!” Trixie yelled. Trixie pulled Twilight into a hug, and then a deep kiss.

“The last I heard of the Sin of Lust is the Crystal Empire” I said.

“Then you will go there first” Princess Celestia said.

“Twilight, I need you to go get the sirens amulet’s” I said.

“Okay” Twilight said, pulling away from Trixie’s kiss. Trixie whimpered.

“Golden, go to Zecora’s hut to get the Alicorn Amulet” He said.

“Got it” He said.

“Everyone else, search far and wide for the sins, even in it means leaving Equestria” I said.

“I know where the Sin of Wrath is” Energon said.

“Where?” I asked.

“There’s this gate inside the mountain mines, it says, “Seven Deadly Sins: Sin of Wrath.” He said.

“How do you know this?” I asked.

“Because, I crashed into the mines a long time ago and found the gate” He said.

“Alright, how do we open it?” I asked.

“I saw a bunch of holes for what looked like jewels,” He said, “That crystal looks like one of the holes.”

“The other sins might be the keys,” I said, “Now go find them, we’ll meet back here every 24 hours.”

“Let’s do this” Energon said.

“Team Stinger. Let’s do this!” I said. And that was only the beginning.

Comments

[WyngsTriumphant]

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I hope it's the first one. If so, nice job! Terrible punctuation, ridiculous plot, failure to explain or develop said plot, lack of any foundation, original characters out of nowhere with no explanation or credible history, obligatory insertion of edgy stuff like sin without any proper weight, hints of self-insertions, odd, fighting-based names, little to no details anywhere, unoriginal premise that commits the same fatal flaw (lack of individuality for the next-gen characters), out-of-nowhere an unexplained cameos and changes to the way things are, the inclusion of stuff that's WAAYYYY out of place in Equestria (guns? really?), and the lack of an AU tag to excuse any of this. For the cherry on the turd, the lack of even mentioning any ships in an attempt to pander to a certain crowd.

If this is meant to be a joke, very nice. Could be better, but it still made me smile at the utter ridiculousness of it all. Good work, look forward to more

If this was meant to be an actual story...

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I think what I said should be a strong hint as to how you're doing. But again, I trust that it's first option.

[YellowHornBrony]

8127278 I actually forgot to put that this was a sequel to the Trixie and Twilight story.

[YellowHornBrony]

8127278 also, it was trollfic and serious fic

[WyngsTriumphant]

8129769 Both? How does that even work

Actually, nevermind, I don't want to know. Again, for now, I'm entertained and I love what you did. Don't say anything that might ruin that illusion for me.

[YellowHornBrony]

8127278 Actually, there was Twixie in there

[YellowHornBrony]

8130521 Because I like to act like Pinkie when I write, that's why