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Fuzzyfurvert
I write pony words that people seem to like. I also review fics and draw purty pictures, apperently. I'm an older fan of MLP, so expect a lot of 80's references.
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I had to wipe the tears from my eyes so that I could see this art more clearly. It was beautiful
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Flarity you say? Don't mind if I do.
that was an amazing piece of writing. I love your work.
Mhmm. Deliciously written
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Glad you liked it!
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Thank you!
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Maybe for you; personally, I'm not a fan of futa.
A mare has a real penis? No thank you.
A mare gets a magical penis that fades after use? Yeah, I can dig that.
Strap-on dildos and the like? I can go with that too.
I'm not a fan of futa because it makes stallions somewhat redundant (only males are supposed to have penises), and I myself am male. That is my reason; accept it or don't.
Magical penises are okay, because the mare doesn't keep it post-coitus, and only unicorns/alicorns can create them. A pegasus/pegasus or pegasus/earth pony relationship cannot have them, which means the aforementioned redundancy doesn't occur.
8456491 Pony porn is serious business, dude.
Domshy is best Shy. Needs more, way more. Also, they were super cute together
This is adorable in the naughtiest way possible, very well done Fuzzy.
Yay, Flarity in the feature box!
The futa shaming is strong with this one. Aw.
"Fluttershy darling, what's this sketch about?"
"What one?"
"This one. That seems to involve you, a crop, and Rainbow Dash gagged and tied to a chair."
"EEP!"
Was this written for me? Reading immediately.
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Well, to be perfectly honest, this was kind of a hot mess.
There were hot parts. There were messy parts. Obviously intended. So, congrats there.
but the whole thing felt... muddled. You jumped between Rarity and Fluttershy's POV, everyone's mood seemed to be a confusing sort of manic. "Embarrassed and waaaaah."
We spent so much time being bombarded with the above that there wasn't really any noticeable shift. It felt like there were two different film reels going. On the one, we have two blushing, nervous, and awkward gals confronted with naughty stuff. On the other film reel we had two characters getting it on. I kept wondering when the characters in the first would notice the ones in the second, and go, "Holy shit someone is making our bodies fuck."
The manic nervousness wasn't that of an awkward first time. It was the unending panic of a marching band of Godzillas stomping through your city. You're dodging falling debris, trying to not get stepped on, it's loud, you're terrified for your life, and oh, something is happening with your genitals... what?
What the story lacked was a sense of refinement or nuance. I kind of expected that from Rarity. We started out in her head. But before she could decide, "you know what, I do really want this, lets make this comfortable and safe for Fluttershy" we jump ship over to her head, and we're bombarded with her "omg, my vagina is doing that thing and I need to run away and hide."
The story never slowed down and made it through its own paces. So when things finally did get to "the good bits" I was still left trying to figure out just what the two were feeling, and where it was that they decided "Yes, lets have sex, not just pose for drawing."
So, I guess in the end, thanks for writing a story where Rarity and Fluttershy got to play with their vaginas together. It wasn't really all that convincing that they were really the characters described, and it came across a lot more like someone mashing two plushies together and mumbling their attempt at their voices. It's a start that they got to keep their bits and play with them, but it would be nice to have a smoother and more compelling attempt at convincing me that it is them doing it.
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So...what you're saying is...I should write a sequel where Fluttershy and Rarity read this, and then after Fluttershy is revived with smelling salts, they both stare disapprovingly at me for 5K words?
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That would be awesome as fuck. Dooo eeet.
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