ORIGINAL PUBLISH DATE: August 15, 2014
1: Emissaries from another time have come to conquer United Equestria to rule the dimensional universe with total darkness.
2: A crazed pony is going about stealing Cutiemarks for a sinister plan of his own.
3: Queen Celestia has grown deathly ill and her life is at risk.
4: Lightning is having a hard time controlling his Enticorn form
5: Spike is having trouble dealing with his true feelings for Rarity
6: Cadance feels she is bad luck to all after she has nightmares
Chapters (28)
That cover art is way too bright and happy.
8123831 ikr
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Believe it or not; that cover art is a pic of the MAIN ENEMY
8124143 do you see how there's a bit of lighting in your profile picture that makes your character or whoever is chained up easier to see? You might want to try that for this cover to make the villain easier to see against the dark backdrop.
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there we go... much better? (And also, he's not chained, he's literally sitting on a mountain. You'll see why in the next chapter)
8124304 much better.
Where is the Dark King from?
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Do you really want me to say, or can you wait along? (the explanation IS in the story, and it will come, eventually.)
make clop, then you will rack in the upboats.
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Whatever that means
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Written porn. Of horses.
Maybe even of your characters.
Because why not.
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Because it's disgusting and that stuff makes me SICK, that's why. and thank you for doubly proving to me that most of the people of this site are in fact pervertive sickos who prefer swearing and sexual preferences. (their down-votes are nothing more than mere acts of ignorance and stupidity)
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Well, why did you post this story here if there was going to backlash?
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It's called standing up for my rights, my beliefs, my preferences, and also standing up to all the pricks, bullies and liars. (It was bad enough when they made sock accounts of me)
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I could dissect your logic, but
I'll just ask how that would accomplish anything.
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It shows I don't break easily, and I'm not letting other people tell me what to do
Pretty good, as always. Keep it up.
Esroh Dab has strange feelings, huh...? Can't wait to see where this goes.
The Cardinals are based on the Chinese Zodiac...
Clever.
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Just like the 12 Devas from Digimon Season 3
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Ooh, double shout-out!
Glad to see that Esroh is questioning who he is and what he stands for, at least to some degree.
I'm new and I have no idea what's going on.
What's an Enticorn?
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and Enticorn (My own creation)
http://dakari-king-mykan.deviantart.com/art/MBPSFM-An-Enticorn-472407579
It's a like a Super Sayian.
8145165 Oh, neat. Alien X and Goku had a kid, who has a horn. I like the idea of super-forms a lot, but doesn't this one look a bit too humanoid?
Also, why are you an anti-brony? Did the glimposters anger you that much? Or does it have something to do with how quickly this got downvotes?
The Dark King is, honestly, a very interesting villain in terms of origin.
And mega mode is a Power Rangers reference, yes?
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Mega Mode
http://dakari-king-mykan.deviantart.com/art/MBPSFM-Mega-Mode-477208524
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I left a comment on that page, if you'd like to see it.
You did good, Mykan. Ya did good.
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That's typical MLP Season, you moron
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https://renegadetheunicorn.deviantart.com/status/12346318
I thought I had warned you to stop harassing me on DA... you won't listen... oh, well!
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Wow, just wow... NOTHING... I warned you to stop riffing me and knock it off with your insulting me, and you didn't... neither did Legendbringer, and look what happened to his DA account... TWICE!!
Okay, I've got no idea why everyone seems to hate this guy, I read a blog, a bunch of comments, I have yet to read the story, and I still have no idea why everyone hates him despite the fact he's an "anti-brony"
I'm gonna read through this for the sake of humoring everyone, and seeing if there's even a tiny excuse for why things are the way they are.
EDIT: I'm gonna have to go back so much further, I didn't realize there was more before this.
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I can answer that for you...
People call me horrible in general-- the don't like the way I live, don't like the ways I LOOK at life, they judge me solely based on what I write, and a lot of these jerks have been up my butt since 2008, maybe more... stalking me round the net and making up stories to bully me.
they just downvote my stuff without looking, feeling I deserve it and WORSE, and anyone who gives me encouragement or nice remarks get downvoted and picked on too.
What does that say?
In the end, people just being overbearing pricks...
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Well, I did some reading, and I'll admit the stories aren't really for me, but it's not poorly written, and I haven't read nearly enough to really judge how good or bad the series is.
So, I won't give you a thumbs up or down, just know, I don't know shit that's happening, and I hope you're truly innocent in whatever shit is going on.
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Oh they don't CARE HOW it's written...
If it's made by me, they just THUMB IT DOWN, like that.
I post one prologue, it gets 21 downvotes in one night.
And according to https://www.fimfiction.net/user/117780/Alphamon_Ouryuken (One of my most hated haters) "You deserve this because you are a horrible person. The only horrible person here"
(Guy even tried to turn Tara Strong against me on Twitter by feeding her lies and stories)
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Where exactly did this start, and why do people do this to you?