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This story is a sequel to Frustrating Adagio
After the death of Sonata and deteriorating relations with Adagio, Aria has had it. She is sick and tired of the human world and has decided to return to Equestria. When the portal opens, she goes home but quickly learns that life in Equestria won't be as easy as she thought.
AU tag for OOC Aria Blaze and unicorn Aria Blaze.
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My first comment: Is there going to be a sequel? Second, this was good, but Celestia seemed out of character. Third, what are the Humane 5 going to think about this?
8147061 Regarding the sequel, I'm not sure. If I do decide to do one it will be following them through their new lives in Equestria and yes I know I made Celestia a bit out of character. What the Humane 5 thinks about it is pretty much irrelevant at this point since not only did Celestia destroy the mirror, but she also confiscated the debris from it so Twilight couldn't fix it. Thanks for thinking it was good.
Maybe a sequel where Sunset gets mad at Celestia for taking away her ability to see her friends and Celestia realizes that she was in the wrong for destroying the mirror and tries to fix things for them.
Also this gets a fave and a like.....as usual.
8147317 Yeah, I'd like a sequel like that.
8147221 WHAT THE BUCK IS THIS?! THIS S HORSE CRAP!
You actually expect me to accept this this..garbage as a ending for such a story.
Aria forced Adagio to accept things Aria never changed she still a freaking cold hearted Bitch in the end, and Celestia a freaking TYRANT!!
She took their choice to return against their will, and overruled Twilight as a Princess, and pretty much compared Sunset to the past version of her with even bother to check on how much she changed from before, what so ever, proving she a FAILURE as a teacher and mentor.
The human version don't matter? BAH! I know they be heartbroken and sure they relay that thru Sunset's book, which was left behind
It because she can't be with the Good Sombra Starswirled the Bearded did the same thing to her and she just being bitter mare, and figured to do it to others.
Nothing was resolved and feels rushed and down right nonsense.
This is nothing more then lazy writing.
8147950 Here you are complaining about this story but you can't even make a comment without multiple typos and horrid grammar. I'd hate to think how bad one of your stories would be. Next time you decide to make a comment on a story, get an editor.
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Was more annioyed and upset on how this story ended and in such a bad manner, I wrote too fast. But not talking about grammar just how...well the story ended it's...nonsense.
Anyways my comment was edited and fixed and hope reads better.
I still stand by it, the story was good but the ending is bad.
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Celestia never did go check on Sunset because she just took off. Regarding the show, Celestia never went and checked on her, she just moved on. I don't think that makes Celestia a failure as a teacher and mentor, that is simply a matter of Sunset being a lousy student.
When I said the human world is irrelevant, I meant that in the case I wrote a sequel because all ties between Equestria and the human world have been cut forever. Yes they are devastated but that would have no effect on the story itself because Sunset can't even interact with them anymore.
And regarding Aria and Adagio, yes Aria kind of forced her to go back and may have seemed like a heartless bitch imposing her will on her but the way I wrote it, it was Aria being concerned about her sister transitioning to her new life in Equestria.
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I disgaree she didn't move on she just forget Susnet, she wrote her off and never bothered to learn from her msitakes.
Like what she done she says Twilight a Princess but still treats her like a misgudied student, she doesn't even care Sunset may of gotten better or improved and took Sunset away from her friends forever. That is wrong and never be redeemed.
Celestia has shown she hasn't learn a dam thing, she repeating the same mistakes like she did with Luna which drove her to becoming nightmare moon.
Also Aria did forced Adagio to come to that world so it be easier to make her forget Sonata, she proven she a horrible friend, sister and comrade.
Adagio be better off cutting off ties with her for good and moving with Twilight and Sunset.
I still think Aria is in the wrong
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I know it has been over three years but I just had a thought cross my mind. To break my writer's block, I may write one where Celestia has a change of heart and allows Twilight and Sunset to fix the mirror so they can visit their friends and I'm also thinking about a possible resurrection spell to revive Sonata and her boyfriend. I'm not sure about what I would have Sunset's fate be because she has grown to love Equestria and Twilight is seriously considering Alicornhood for her....Twilight prior to episode 26 and regarding Sonata and her boyfriend, they'd move to Equestria to be with her sister.....her boyfriend would become a unicorn too....I just have to think of a pony name for him and something he'd be good at.
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I've sort of forgotten a lot of the details that you talked about, since, as you said, it's been years, but I remember liking this series and I'd definitely like a sequel!
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I know it has been a long while but after re-reading this one, I began to wonder about a sequel and everything that could be done with it. Now Aria will continue to live with Lyra and Colgate because with the way she helped her out, she couldn't imagine living anywhere else. With Dagi, I am seriously considering things because despite their deciding to be siren sisters again, she STILL has her doubts about not only Aria and her having Tia bring her to Equestria but the thing with Sonata will always linger in her mind....and of course Sunset misses her human friends. This will likely take me much longer than any of the other stories did given everything that is going on in my life but I'm going to give it a go.
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I'm glad you're reviving this series! I might have to reread it to remember, but that's certainly not a bad thing.
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I am thinking of something, probably way too late. I am working on multiple other stories but I am thinking of working on one where Celestia begins to feel bad over destroying the mirror and allows Twilight and Sunset to work on fixing it. Once it is back up and running, both Adagio and Aria really want to bring their sister back so what they'll do is study up on resurrection magic or perhaps convince Celestia to learn it. They will then go to the human world and dig up both Sonata and her boyfriend's caskets, bring them to Equestria and then use the spell on them, bringing them back to life.
That way the three sisters can be back together again, Sonata can be truly happy and Twilight and Sunset will be able to visit their friends in the human world. Celestia will have only one condition though, that she be allowed to stand guard to keep anything bad from coming through while they are gone. What do you think?
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That sounds good. I also think it'd be a good idea to acknowledge the indifference celestia had to taking away Sunset's friends and just destroying the mirror in general (also sorry for responding so late, I forgot to respond when I first saw it).
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It's alright. I've been thinking and given that I have used resurrection spells in my "Terror in Equestria" series, I thought why not here too? One major issue I just realized though, how the hell are they going to get their caskets out of the ground and into Equestria. Well if I choose to do this, I'll figure something out.
10394184
Alright, I have come up with an idea for a sequel, I've already began work on it....and this involves something that you and everyone else probably never expected....I won't give any spoilers but all I'm going to say is that it will be a shock to everyone. Hopefully I can get this done sometime in March or April at the latest given my current life situation.
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Oh? Color me intrigued.
11148039
The sequel is done and it is called "Sisters' Reunion"
No it isn't but since this is your AU, I'll let it slide
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This is one of the images that I thought of when Colgate said this.
i.postimg.cc/mkLHvFKK/large.png
And here is the baby picture I found.
i.postimg.cc/HxdGCpzf/5a8.png
There is also another one out there I saw once where they adorable little things at the beach.
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Well the fifth and final part of the series is up....I have a feeling you'll like it more than the fourth one.
They were part ponies as babies or is just the angle?
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This is just cute fan art I found....I'd like to think they were adorable like that.
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oh ok :D
Shimmy's gonna off herself out of anger