The Rainbow Dash cuddling one I feel should be way, way more detailed. Almost all of the description is describing what is physically going on, when it should be explaining how it felt for both characters as well. Some of the physical details should be combined with the details of how the characters feel as well. Instead of "You hug her tighter" it should be "You hug her tighter, Rainbow Dash letting out a cute groan in response." The fanfiction is good regardless and I am going to give it a like.