Full Moon: The Lost One

His day went horrible, now its getting worse

I post randomly

I'm a furry so the main character is indeed not a Pony.

Started 23rd Apr 2017

Chapters (3)

Prologue · 23rd Apr 2017 · 1,262 words
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Sandvich · 5th Jun 2017 · 1,174 words
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You dont know? · 31st Jan 2022 · 1,739 words
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Comment posted by Aunty Furby deleted Jun 6th, 2017

Aunty Furby

Aunty Furby #3 · Jun 6th, 2017 · · · Sandvich ·

So be honest you like it?

or does it need improvements in areas?

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General_Rommel

General_Rommel #7 · Jun 6th, 2017 · · 1 · Sandvich ·

no need to worry about Copyright, this site allows it. plus, i REALLY hope you continue writing.

The only problems i found, was some grammar issues and some words that are in the wrong place. Besides that, its perfect.

The_Poket_Umbreon

The_Poket_Umbreon #8 · Jun 6th, 2017 · · · Sandvich ·

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It needs some Capitalization at the start of some sentences, names, and there’s a few grammar errors here and there as well.

Aunty Furby

Aunty Furby #9 · Jun 7th, 2017 · · · Sandvich ·

8214251 I will still try not to copy and I'm working on my next chapter just started it actually also could you point them out?

Aunty Furby

Aunty Furby #10 · Jun 7th, 2017 · · · Sandvich ·

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il check that

The-Hidden-Fox

The-Hidden-Fox #11 · Nov 19th, 2018 · · · Prologue ·

' what is the afterlife going to be like, and couldn't this wait for a Wednesday, not a Monday? ' ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ I feel the grass I feel grass 'is their grass in the afterlife?'

Just... fix this atrocity please

The-Hidden-Fox

The-Hidden-Fox #12 · Nov 19th, 2018 · · · Prologue ·

Also, if that is twilight, she went all

Be GONE THOT

The-Hidden-Fox

The-Hidden-Fox #13 · Nov 19th, 2018 · · · Sandvich ·

well, now I feel guilty for having to turn her down "I will try you never know what the Evergreen might send at you so I will stick as close to the edge as I possibly can, but I can't make a promise I won't be able to kee p ."

Fix the p

Edit: oh you little-

The-Hidden-Fox