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Marked Cross comes from a backwater region on the edge of the Undiscovered West. He's always been hesitant about touching the subject of his earth pony family with others, and he'd prefer to keep it that way.

It's too bad that other ponies know about Halihoof.

Heavily influenced by Sir Hat's Ben and the Bats, unfortunately removed from Fimfiction.

Updates when time permits.

First Published
20th Apr 2017
Last Modified
21st Apr 2017
#1 · 4d, 20h ago · · · Killing Time ·

good story I always like to see good pre mane six stuff .

as veteran/brony  your company size element is about right as embassy guard.

also if  you plan some cool battle scenes  a overwhelmed  company  makes for better drama.

#2 · 4d, 20h ago · · · Killing Time ·


There'll probably be a couple of intense moments, but it won't be entire battle scenes. We are trying to be diplomatic, after all. Thanks for commenting!

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