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StormLuna


Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.

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You have transferred to CHS from another school and had to leave all your old friends behind. As you look at all the people around you, one in particular catches your eye and you realize that you just have to get to know her.

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Waifu material inbound

*cough* sequal where he haunts Aria for what she did. *cough*

8105369 I'll definitely think about it. I do have other stories I'm planning on my docket but one thing is for sure, a sequel such as that would take a whole lot longer to write than this one did.

When I first saw this I was thinking "oh great, another 2nd person story where 'you' woos Sonata and gets her into bed." Despite that I decided to give this a chance and I certainly am glad I did. I never once imagined I'd read one of these where "you" winds up suffering a terrible fate. Upvote and faved for originality.

Okay, first of all, what even is this.

Second of all, what kind of rats are the Dazzlings?

aww close but no cigar. still fun to read though

The ending gave me mixed emotions... I was happy then I was confused and then came the sadness then came the vengeful anger, overall, a very emotional story my heart has whiplash...

8107270 I did throw quite a few mixed things in there at the end but I wanted this 2nd person fic to end differently than so many that I have read....and I figured that would create it.

I hope you make a sequel.

8112054 It is already in the works! :scootangel:

Wow..... sequel with a happy ending please

And that is why Seducing Aria is a better choice
Less chance of getting murdered. and she's hot, so bonus

8602605

As long as you don't piss Aria off....she still wouldn't have any problems killing you if she thought you stabbed her in the back.

To be honest I don't like how you ended the story like getting killed by aria and I personally love Sonata

8602605

And going back through my comments, let me say this. You're right about Aria, she's hot and is easily my favorite of the three.

8701161

Sorry for the late, late response but here is why I ended this the way I did. I have seen plenty of second person fics where "you" winds up seducing Sonata at least into a relationship or other things that would require the M tag. I decided to go against the grain with this one and write one where "you" doesn't get in Sonata's skirt.

8602605

Hell after going back through my comments, I may just go ahead and write a first person story where I seduce Aria. She is my favorite siren and yes, she is hot, very hot....and the worst thing that may happen with someone who gets with Aria is she'd be controlling.

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Those pigtails are beyond hot in my opinion and I love her personality. Everyone seems to love Sonata. I'll admit, Sonata is cute and all but Aria is the hot one.

While Sonata has clearly captured your heart, the two individuals she is closest to unnerve you. Her oldest sister Adagio, the one in your class, has pulled you aside on more than one occasion and warned you what would happen if you broke her little sister's heart. The one a year behind you, Aria, too has pulled you aside although her warnings could be more or less classified as death threats. Despite her having two sisters who seem overprotective, you won't let that stop your quest to one day capture Sonata's heart.

It’s one thing to pull someone aside once, but to do it on multiple occasions is kinda annoying.

Soon you come to and pull yourself up but something isn't right, you got up but your body is still laying on the floor. You stand there in shock as you realize that you are dead. What bothers you just as much is seeing Adagio trying to drag a devastated Sonata away from your corpse. What angers you though is seeing Aria, brass knuckles and all, standing with her foot planted on your chest, her fist pumped high in triumph and a scowl on her face.

The whole school is looking at the scene in shock and fear. The situation is only intensified when Aria proclaims, "You see this losers, this is what happens if you hit on my sister!"

What was the point of pulling him aside and warning him then?

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Aria is an EXTREMELY overprotective sister and didn't like what she saw. She figured that if he wouldn't listen to the warnings, that death is all that would suffice.

Wow, Aria actually killed Anon with one punch. Frickin' Saitama over here

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Well she did strike him in the temple with brass knuckles. Aria is bad ass in the first three stories in this series. She ultimately starts to mellow out once she returns to Equestria and becomes a unicorn.

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