Spike, for years has made fun of Twilight and her friends for watching the stupid show My Little Human but after "accidentally" watching an episode he instantly falls in love with it, but how will he tell the others, maybe he just won't.
However only a short month has past and Twilight has sneaking suspicions about what Spike does every Saturday night, he has been cancelling plans with Big Mac and Discord and she thinks she has caught him humming the theme song to her favorite show. Could it be? Has Spike found his soft side?
Chapters (1)
It would have been a better conclusion, I think, to have him watch it with them and have a heartwarming scene about Spike realizing it's okay to do some things that aren't considered 'tough'.
Overall, though, for a first work this is pretty good! Stylistically, the flow was just a little awkward, but you'll get better at that. No major grammar or spelling mistakes, which is better than a lot of firsts I've seen.
All in all, good work!
Keep writing!
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Thanks so much! The feedback is much appreciated, the story is still incomplete I'm still gonna get more up there I'm glad this is actually going so fast!
OGMIGOSH!! I was JUST writing a story about 'My Little Human', the idea was stuck in my mode for an LOOOOONG time, so I decided to write it... Until YOU beat me to it XD
Looks like Spike is a... um... Broman?
8125517 easy for you to say, when 1 family member or friend finds out about me being a Brony, everything on this site for me is ruined. But maybe my parents will let me continue writing stories?
But for now, I'm staying as a 'Closet Brony'
8125721 And you think I'm not? When my family discovered I was a brony... Well, suffice to say I've been hiding the fact that I read/write mlp fan fiction.
I just think it'd be a nice moral for the story to have. Partly because I wish that's what happened to me.
8125636 Oh! Didn't even realize this was incomplete! Down for the bookmarks folder. I'll see you with it next update!
8125763 neva said you werent
8125871 My misinterpretation then. Sorry!
8126342 NP