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“It is better to be young in your failures than old in your successes.”


Starlight Glimmer likes to overthink things. Love is probably not one of the things she should overthink. Or approach as a task. Thorax will be in her sights for the next few days, leaving her with the question if she can confront both of their feelings within that time, or handle his foal-like curiosity of the equestrian world.

Edited/Proofread by Rocinate

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 30 )

Starlax? I ship Starburst or Screwrax... but I once wrote a story where Screwball and Thorax were disguised as Starlight and Sunburst... it's called Shaping Love and War.

I like it you should keep going

Starlight x Thorax? *fangirl screaming* :heart: :heart: :heart:

Solid writing. Good job all around here. Looking forward to more. :twilightsmile:

8113524 Do you realize how bad you look advertising your own story in the comments of another?

8114132 That was my fault... I suck.

Alright. Let's see what you've got.

A little wooden, but still fun. Pm me if you want a beta-reader / macro editor.

8117085 I'd love someone to help! :twilightsmile:

8118497 Really?! Oh stop it! I'm sure plenty of people besides me :twilightblush:

If they end up on the cutie map I'm sure Twilight will have the room corentine for weeks :rainbowlaugh:

I'm loving this so far, I can't wait for more!

Please continue with this story it's really good. Thorax and Starlight are my new OTP!!!

I love this story, great work!

Did Thorax eat himself into a food coma, or was he just that tired?

8201725 Probably just tired, but binging on foreign food doesn't help.:twilightsmile:

Good grief, I've been in similar situations with friends who end up completely dominating a social situation just by their presence.
But I guess the point of this story isn't to let Starlight work things out peacefully, is it?

I don't mean to be picky, but perhaps it would be best if a “bowel” did not slide towards her, after all.

Even if her childhood was just a little bit messed up her her whole ‘equal’ phase.

Um... I'm not sure what this statement means as it is currently organized. The double "her" in particular is throwing me off.

This is pretty good. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

I will, I'm just having a hard time writing this summer.

Comment posted by hello motherfucker deleted Sep 6th, 2017

Now I’m sure Trixie’s up to snatching Thorax. I’m positive now.

and now? is not it hard for you?
I'm sorry, I do not want to be obtrusive, just... ehehe:twilightsheepish:

Trixie the love guru! Gotta admit, it has a nice ring to it...

Trixie is my favorite Fairly Odd Parents character.

Okay, I'm a bit curious: I love this story (it's actually on my favourites list), but what does the story title mean? Whom does it refer to?

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