Raising the Moon's Spirits

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When the Cutie Mark Crusaders ( Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo) notice Princess Luna looking rather depressed at a party, they decide to cheer her up the best they can. ( Can they "raise the moon"?)

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superfun

superfun #1 · Apr 19th, 2017 · · ·

A bit short, but just hilarious enough for me to fave.

frenettek314

frenettek314 #2 · Apr 19th, 2017 · · ·

8105319 Aw, you are just too kind. Thank you. ;)

superfun

superfun #3 · Apr 19th, 2017 · · ·

8105351 You're welcome

jasien

jasien #4 · Jan 13th, 2018 · 1 · ·

A very sweet story; could do with some editing, but a nice, enjoyable way to pass the time.

Indefintehiatus

Indefintehiatus #5 · Mar 12th, 2018 · 1 · ·

This was really fun and cute, Scootaloo flirting gets me everytime

Evil Paladin

Evil Paladin #6 · Jul 5th, 2020 · · ·

Just then, Sweetie Belle got an idea. " Maybe she doesn't feel special. like she's left out without somepony. One of us should try to compliment her."
Going along with Sweetie's idea, Scootaloo walked over to the beautiful princess of the night and said, " Hey, Princess Luna! Has anyone ever told you you're a knockout?" with a wink to follow up.
Apple Bloom felt her jaw hanging from her mouth while Sweetie Belle put her head in her hooves, shocked at what was said from the young Pegasus.
Luna's face began to show a dark red blush from her cheeks as she awkwardly responded, " Umm... Thanks Scootaloo.... You too."
Scootaloo walked back to the trio with a confident smirk. " Did you guys hear that? I'm a knockout too"

I needed to back up, and start reading Scootaloo's line in the voice of the Mentally Advanced Series' Scootaloo (voice internally)
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Suddenly much to the surprise of the three, Luna wrapped them all up in a hug with the biggest grin they all had seen on her. " Thank You, You did cheer me up."
The fillies were confused. " How" asked an innocent looking Scootaloo.
" Well, truth is, I was upset because I was starting to feel lonely at this party with nopony to talk to, but then you three came along and now here I am, with good friends to talk to."
" You mean that? Good friends?" asked Sweetie Belle.
" Absolutely. While it was more than a shock with you ponies trying to flirt with me, accusing me of being on drugs, and asking if I was pregnant, you did all that to cheer me up and proves to me how much you care, just like I care about you."
At that moment, the four hugged in blissful silence as the party roared on. The party with good friends to keep Luna company. You see, while somepony you know may look upset, it may only take one...or two... or three good friends to be there, and raise the moon's spirits.