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TheArcher20


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I feel like going MWAHAHAHAHAH after the end. So time to do it in alien. BLARLARLARLARLARLARG!

Steel Burner? Is this in any way related to the Mistborn books?

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never heard of it. i thought of the name randomly while thinking up story ideas and it just seemed most applicable to what i have planned in store for our friend here.

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Eh, it's a series of books in which people can ingest metals, and then burn them within their stomachs to acquire certain powers. Steel is one of the metals those people can burn.

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I completely agree with you... Blarg Chicka Honk Honk


Anywho, this story is pretty good. Can't really get a whole feel since it's only the prologue though, so I'm looking forward to future chapters! As far as I can tell this seems like it'll be awesome and funny though, so lets ride the update! Woohoo!

882304 You did it wrong. It's bow chicka honk honk.

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I see what you both did there. :yay:

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that sounds interesting but thats not what i'm going to aim for.


glad everyone likes this so much so far. i hope the future chapters are just as enjoyable.

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He actually says it twice the first time was Blarg and then Tucker corrected him to say Bow... Or was that the big alien that said blarg chicka honk honk? Y'know what? Let's caboose things up. Hey Chicka Bump Bump!

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The amounts of awesomeness can only be seen by thy Lunar Goddess. So in retrospect... The fun hath been doubled, Huzzah!

Nipponpunk and Ponies? I love it!:pinkiehappy:

Also: I keep picturing the Samurai as one of those bigass robots from Sucker Punch

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Nipponpunk and ponies? wuts that :derpytongue2:

and that sounds funny but no. he looks similar to the cover picture

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Nipponpunk is like Cyber/Steampunk, only with Japanese culture rather than Technocracies/Handlebar mustaches. Ponies are smaller than average equines commonly used as beasts of burden :ajsmug:

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ahh thanks for clarifying

Just a random comment, That picture looks like lagiacrus armor from the MH series

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sorry i wouldn't know. just pulled out the most befitting picture from "google images"

When can I expect more? :duck:

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i plan on posting these chapters regularly at least once a week

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if that's a yay for you then Here will catch your eye.

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my word i think it is! that's a suprise.

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Samurai have helmets.
They wouldn't be knocked out by a single hit.

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yeah. this chapter turned out better then i thought it would. thanks to my editor that is.

well so ends our time with our smexy gremlin friends, a digital cookie as to the guess of our next enemy boss

and thus begins the story of how Iwamoto Kogan lost his mind
loving it so far, I thank you profusely for putting two things I enjoy into the same story

just now realized you prob arent going to have any of the mane 6 at all.

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if i can fit it in, it might be in the sequel

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