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Twilight, Starlight Glimmer and Moondancer were having a sleepover together. After hearing Spike liked Roleplaying games, Moondancer shows off a seemingly innocent book. Without realizing it she unleashes a spell that teleports them into a world for foals. Now diapered and foals themselves, they must traverse the world and find the elements to return back home.
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Loved it! I cant wait to see what else happens. Ecspecially considering that this is Moondancer and Starlight Glimmer's first encounter with each other.
It'd be interesting if Trixie somehow stumbled upon this.
Awwwww, I love the coverart! So CUTE! I especially love Starlight's expression!
8107086 yes! please have to take care of them!
Okay, you have my interest.
SO AWESOME!! <3
I am interested... will keep a look out for this one
Please oh please oh please update quickly
This should be fun.
Foals on an adventure. let the silliness commence!
Fetish story AND plot? Well shit son, sign me up!
Me thinks Starlight had some horrifying potty training experiences in her foalhood.
This story is just too cute and fun! Though I DO wonder what sort of effects it will have once they become big again.....
Also, since they defeated the equivalent of Nightmare Moon, what then will they have to face to get the rest of the Elements of Snuggles? I'm super curious, because I really don't know what they'll have to face next, ESPECIALLY in regards to how it will be the faolish versions of enemies!
Lucky pony. I wish I lived in this universe.
Great! Now I want to write a story where Twilight goes on an epic quest to get her Smartypants doll back from Big Macintosh.
This is super cute!
Love how they all interact with each other and Nightlight Moon was adorable. Cant wait to see the next "villan". Also isnt there an actual foal Twilight in this universe 
. Will they have to meet the foal Twilight anytime soon?
8112921 thanks hehe and no not really although maybe I'll have celestia feed Twi a bottle when they go to canterlot (soadly never happened)
In this universe, are Pumpkin and Pound Cake rulers of a kingdom?
8111839 WEll i have just thought of a plot twist for the end.
Might lead into aOne Shot story about... 
"no spoilers!" 
So now each of the foals has contributed to a major victory for the group. Starlight beat the potty monster, Moondancer outsmarted Nightlight Moon, and Twilight upstaged Trixie.
SO ADORABLE!!
Though I am sure that Twilight & Moondancer will get teased later about messing their diapers >=)
Still really curious to see what effects all this will have once they get back to their own world
This chapter was the best yet I hope there's going to be more than three elements if there are I have an idea the element of naughtiness held by foal discord
I love to see twilight her! And they have change her!
I loved the little cute battle with Twilight and Trixie.
So the Element of Padding is an actual diaper? Who would've guessed?
This chapter got me so hard. The Element of Padding was a diaper!
I'm dying right now!
8141363 Wonder what would've happened had Discord used it? Because that seems like a very inconvinent thing for an element to be.
If flurry heart is going to be there I hope we get some insight on how the ponies of this world reproduce even though most of them are foals
8141833 Well, Mrs. Cake isn't, so there's at least a few grown-ups. Though even the grown-ups likely wear diapers.
Oh that is just too good with having Discord take pictures of everyone in diapers <3
8141833 well I never stated flat out but it more took elents from the three minds to flesh out the world they are in. I mean clear logic does not apply to toddlers.
Daw, so cute to see the Sombra in this universe is nicer. Makes me wonder what Chrysalis and Tirek are like though?
I'm confused.
I thought that everypony wore diapers, so why is Somby being potty trained.
And how is Shining Armor a foal if Flurry Heart is still around.
8156431 Yeah the part with Shining Armor being young enough for diapers, but then having Flurry around makes ZERO sense!
Though it was cute to see the boys in pink <3
Now it's time to see what Chrysalis is like in this universe.
This was a fun bit of fluff. Not everything has to be about strictly advancing the plot forward ^_^
Will there be a baby Fluffle Puff?
Yay little Chyssi.
I liked this very much! Thank you for writing this!
Continuity Error! How has Spike never heard of a toilet if Cadence took 'Somby' to one?
8204580 Hmm derp
no biggie I guess. Each 'town' is differnt foalish stuff so this Spike just in denial. plus you know potty monster lol
8204911 I know a guy who would be irritable about that error. Luckily, that guy isn't me. I'll let it slide this time, but do try to be careful in the future. Don't want to make things confusing.
So cute. I love baby Chrysalis so much. I hope Tirek is next.
Seems like every villain in this universe isn’t really that much of a villain (besides Discord but let’s face it Discord’s a trouble maker at heart, even reformed). Actually makes me wonder what Tirek might be like in this universe.
Well Starlight, you act like a foal sometimes, I think this is just the universe correcting an imbalance.
Perfect Ending
I really enjoyed the story is there something I don't like about the very end though I think it's the way it just kind of feels like it cuts off
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Yeah I suppse I should add a few more lines to the end. Onlj a paragraph should do.
You know, considering how much nicer the villains are here...maybe it was a seriously mistake to have Elements of Harmony, rather than Elements of Padding....
Good story.
Just saying you can add two more chapters for alt endings.
One for Moondacer be the baby and the other for Twilight be the baby.
This is lovely! <3
I can't WAIT to read the sequel! <3