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broncoman18


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Equestria boasts its loving ways, but deep down, there is an empty feeling. A feeling that, somehow, their lives aren't complete. Christians nowadays would call it a god shaped hole in their hearts.

And, as always, God cares for everyone (and everypony), so he sends his only son on yet another mission of salvation.

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Comments ( 15 )
Comment posted by Hopeful_Ink_Hoof deleted Apr 24th, 2017

I'm interested. :twilightsmile:

May God go with you :pinkiehappy:

A interesting Start. May the friendship be with you.

8115905 I'm looking to him for guidance, actually.

8117078 :pinkiehappy:

Glad and good to hear it :rainbowdetermined2:

I'm curious why you deleted Hopeful_Ink_Hoof's comment. I read it when it was first posted, and I thought it was a helpful critique of your chapter's shortcomings. Deleting critical reviews of your own work can give you a negative reputation, and while his comment was highly critical, there wasn't anything inflammatory or rude in it, so its deletion confuses me.

8118038 When something is said in a way that discourages me, it will be deleted. Please keep your opinions to yourself.

8119472 wow.

You're gonna go far.

8119478 Please tell me that was positive.

Even though I'm Mormon, this is a very unique story concept, this had probably never been done before, I'm proud to see this on Fimfiction :raritywink::twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::twilightsheepish::yay::heart:

8121164 Thank you so much for the positive feedback :twilightsmile: I have had to deal with so many discouraging comments.

The only bad thing about this fic is that it ended

Dear author,
I really love this story. If you can please conture this story.

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