• Member Since 27th Feb, 2015
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Moosetasm


A partially insane Knoxville Brony who likes to write. I also edit. And Vector too. Who knew? Not I. If only I could focus on just one...

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Octavia is just a bum cellist living in what passes for the Ponyville slums. She is forced to play at birthday parties and small events until she is given an unexpected shot at returning to the big time. Oh, and she's a were-shark. Can't forget that.

Sex tag for sexual references, gore tag for shark reasons.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

Took me time to accept a horse playing a cello, but a shark? This I gotta see.

Good job on the story so far, although its written like it has poor pacing, it reads perfectly well! That tends to happen with crazy or very strange stories like this. Sort of like Skarknado.

This looks like it's going to be delightfully absurd. Just remember to capitalize those place names at the start of the story.

8095679
Yeah, I found myself alternating pacing for effect. Like she starts thinking, the story feels serious, it slows down. But when things start getting crazy, it happens fast.
8095784
I went back and fixed a few capitalizations, poor thing didn't get a proper edit. Wish I'd known about the contest a week earlier. :derpyderp1:
8095827
What exists, exists because you let me know about this insane contest. :derpytongue2: Oddly enough I knew that Sharktavia was a thing for a while, I just never considered doing my own chapter until this contest showed up.

A bigger cello? So she's graduating to a double bass? :pinkiegasp:
Oh, and she's a were shark, I guess that's a thing... :applejackunsure:
Cute start, I hope more eventually shows up. :twilightsmile:

9508705
Oh, there’s more. It’s just a matter my plate of all of this other stuff which is assaulting my forebrain.

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