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MadDonut
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Definitely
Isn't (I think is what you wanted)
I have no clue what you meant by that last part.
8090126 Oh, the short description. Sorry I don't usually give that much attention seeing how little characters it gives you but I'll definitely have to fix that. Also the main description can use some tweaking too. I guess this is what I get for procrastinating the readiness to publish this fic until two hours prior.
But thanks MyBronyGod
8090145 the long one isn't bad honestly. Could use a tiny bit of tweaking I suppose but as is it's fine. The short description was the first one I saw since it was on the newly uploaded list on the front page.
Ya' need an editor to look this over. There are a ton of little mistakes that should be caught before you publish.
8090413 I swear I am so blind to these. Also G-Doc my have something against me because it for some reason doesn't underline most misspelled words. I'll have to check my preferences to make sure I didn't accidentally press add to dictionary every other time but was it at least good?
Also last thing. I put out a thread for this but all I got was a guy who'd do it only if he got paid two dollars I think per thousand words. So I didn't wanna pay and no one else seemed interested so I guess I lucked out there.
so let me see if I got this right Turquoise has a friend who is a griffon and Sapphire has a pet griffon. Is this some Goofy and Pluto stuff or is Ralek that kinky?
8090425
Yes, pretty much the Pluto Goofy thing.
This is basically Dileak's world with his OC(Check out the link and then click to his NSFW). Sapphire in his art does have Ralek(A green, grey Gryphon) as a pet. His explanation was he's instinctual at best but very primitive. He understands some words but is mostly just an animal. The other gryphon's, as he explained, are completely normal.
Fun fact: Sapphire can only do wingjobs on the Gryphon. Dileak's answer, "It'd probably kill her otherwise."
Also the picture was supposed to link to his SFW tumbler but it doesn't for some reason. So, I just updated the description where he's mentioned with a link attached to his name. If you brows a bit on his NSFW you might pick up on a few references. A lot to be precise.
8090417 I'd offer, but I'm unfortunately bogged down with two authors that I edit for and another that I do prereading for (by the tens of thousands of words), plus real life, so I'm afraid you're out of luck here as well. All I can recommend would be to use Looking for Editors or The Proofreader Group, alternatively, or in addition, you could put a small note right in the description asking if anyone wants to edit.
I'm tracking it for now, I've never read any of your work and I'm not sure if I'm a huge fan of your writing style, but we shall see.
Edit: Two dollars/1k words! Wow. I'd be wealthy if I charged that rate.
Why Sapphire Talk Like That Every Time? Also, you really need beta-reader, many little errors in grammar and capitalization.
8090686 It's Semi-Caps For When She, Or Any Character In Particular, Yells Something. When its pure unadulterated rage that's when you get FULL-CAPS.
And I know I really, really, really do need one I just can never find on sadly. But hey, its tolerable right, hehe...
I thought this was going somewhere. Then it ended.
8092066 Its okay. The next chapter is a sneaky beaky butting incursion if you know what I'm saying.
I want to smack Turq, if that was the goal. Not sure why Sapphire is putting up with his crap.
Well... that happened. Not unexpected, but still... that.
That f
ing BITCH! Now only does she do this to her brother, which I might forgive, but posting it on the internet? How the hell is he supposed to get ANY type of job with ponies knowing he likes taking it up the ass? How is he going to improve if he can't work? Hell, he's homeless at the moment. So, basically, his sister ruined what little life he had. I hope Turquoise gets some type of retribution. This story pissed me off.