It was at this moment everyone knew.... Celestia Fucked up

This has me hooked, I'm reading this until it ends. You should consider getting an editor though, because there are quite a few spelling errors.

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Hey if you know anyone who could edit for me be sure to point them in my direction.
And thanks for the positive feed back, this is my first fic and I'm planning on making it a total balls out no shame revenge fic.

You have a tendency to write sure with an h after the s, besides that this seems like a story with potential, keep up the good work

Ill keep track of this. Always love stories like this.

Tracking and favorite.

Despite the numerous linguistic mistakes, I can tell the intelligence and potential put behind this story and I'm really psyched for what will happen next.

I'm pretty much free this whole summer. If ya want I can maybe try my hand at editing? Maybe fix up the pace of the story a bit and reword some stuff around in addition.

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Hey thanks for the feed back. As for your offer, I would not be opposed to it. I do need and editor cause my grammar and spelling is just awful

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Hey thanks for it a shot, I'm going to be uploading chapters as often as possible, but may slow down once I find an editor.

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Lol thanks for the feedback, Its my first fic ever and I do sorely need an editor

This is not bad at all.

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Hey thanks its my first fic but I hope it will be one of many to come

8219086 looking forward to them!

Can't wait for more

I would, infact, highly recommend remedying the lack of punctuation, which is the most notable flaw in the writing so far.

Still, I can see much potential, which is why I will await more.

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Thanks for the feedback, this is my first fic and I'm currently on the lookout for someone to edit for me. As it stands I will keep pumping out chapters, though expect editing and fine tuning in the future

Is it wrong that I want him to do everything that happens to him to celestial and the guards than give them a slow and painful death? If yes then I don't give a fuck I'm in the mood for some bloodshed! HAHAHA!

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Oh then your gonna love this because I plan on making it a total balls out no shame revenge fic, I've already jumped down the rabbit hole there's no turning back now...

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Excellent

oh heck yeah!!

A pure and simple revenge fic................this should be fun!

"One things for shure she was a daddy's girl, something I hope will never change."

Did you a have stroke or something?

"The royal guard, more spasificly Quick Silver"

Again, stroke or nah, actually you need an editor, or you could go back and check your mistakes.

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Hey no need be dick about it. It's my first fic and I am in need an editor so why not put up or shut up and be my editor?

Need an editor, badly, but the ideas themselves are good.

You done fucked up, Sunbutt!

Celestia. Dear, dear Celestia.
The smart thing to do would've been send him back as soon as possible.
But you didn't do that.

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Celestia is not one to think her actions through.

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Hows it like being a kid with down syndrome?

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Maybe, Just maybe you need to go back to grade school and don't cheat on yo spellin tests

Little did Elliot know that things were about to change because today was the day that the changelings were going to invade Canterlot, more specifically the royal wedding and Elliott's afternoon guards were already replaced by changelings.

FUCK YEAH!!!!
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Oh, and i feel like this TOTALLY FITS

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Sweet Jesus on a hamburger!

This is disgusting and you're a sick weirdo.

You know, I would have snapped his neck, rip out his rib and use it as a shank and kill anyone I see. I wouldn't care how as long as I get out alive

I don’t know what I was expecting but rape was not on the list. Still, great first chapter.