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Slash17
wasn't always a fan of mlp, until I got to know a certain purple dragon named Spike, now I like reading stories where he gets some appreciation
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Intriguing, I shall keep an eye on this one.
Me 2
Pretty good, keep up the good work
Awesome. Seriously i like the whole spike is the main character of the story idea. I sense a herd or harem will be forming quite soon.
Boy, you definitely hit the ground running with this one...
I have to hand to the girls, those are some pretty banging gifts...I have to say though that Twilight's gift of a book of draconian magic (meaning that Spike could use it, because he's a Draconian) maybe be the best one, but man it's close. Also enjoying that each present really shows how well each girl knows Spike, and that he definitely knows the girls have some connections, like he does...
8117264 Glad you liked it, and as for the best gift I believe your right about the magic book, although the wonderbolts nude album comes in pretty damn close huh?
I'm kinda confused by the last few lines: it literally says that he remembers things that haven't happened yet, without ANY indication that the scene was, in any way, a memory of the past
8118172 what do you mean.......I was going to explain the secret to his power in the next chapter
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there was no way to tell that any of this was a memory before those lines, at least from what I remember, and without any other talk of remembering, it gives the impression that he can see into the future, or maybe that's just me
8118213 could you give me specific lines if you dont mind
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Particularly the line
which could've easily been this, which tells us that he knows what will happen to his body, rather than implying that he knows the evil villain that'll show up and what he'll have to do to save everyone, etc.
8118232 I said it like that because i wanted people to think that spike knew something that neither they nor the girls in the story knew was going to happen, but maby ill change it so nobody else gets confused.
8118250 correction: nobody else... but either way, now that I've read the second chapter, that's nothing compared to how rushed it was
Well I wonder what happens next.
I sense there will be lil foals all running through the friendship castle.
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Yeah, for real!! I wasn't kidding--honestly I was gonna say that RD's gift of the Wonderbolts magazine would be his favorite, but then when you compare it to Pinkie's gift of that video game Spike was really hoping but figured it would be a pipe dream to get it, or Fluttershy's gift of an exclusive comic that seems like it's an issue that is not issued en masse...plus I bet if could have the equivalent of the creators having their autographs on them, it was a tough decision...then there was the book, and that made Twilight the winner...nothing better like the loving girlfriend (at least it seems that way) that knows her man so well, plus it showed that even though Spike's got the same raging hormomes of any other man that just became legal, there's more to him than that.
I have to say though, I would love to see a pic of spike with the that hat on. Something about the black cowboy hat, similar to Applejack's own. Not all guys with black hats are bad--Spike's the poster child for the good black hat.....whoops i'm rambling a bit...
Loved will be keeping an eye on this.
Season took place?
His mom and aunt didn't wish him a happy birthday.
The only way his harem would get any better is if he also ended up with Sunset, Zecora and Ember
8145361 you never know, Maby in the sequel. If it happens that is.
Best story! and hope for a sequel.
You should make a different harem story with Spike.
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Dont forget the CMC, and Ditzy, and Cadence. She will leave Shinning for Spike.
Before I read this, what is the Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?
8152408 it dosnt get very bad, I'm actually contemplating removing it.
At least in my opinion it isn't and at worse its a guy getting his limbs cut off and some very brief description of blood splatter
MOAR
I swear the author has a daddy kink.
Wow what a great story! 10 out of 10. Great job 👍😎
Oh god, this fic, I can't man.
It's not the worst but it's not the best. Where can I start, it's kinda cliched and you don't seem to explain things well. You keep trying to rush things. Try to chill with the flow, maybe explain some emotions and all the stuff. (And stop putting so many spacings in-between every single paragraph)
That's all I can say man.
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Yeah I don't worry I knew this wouldn't be all that great, it was my first fic after all. I'm actually considering rewriting it at some point cause I still like the premise.
Pike, lol. I think you mean Spike. Besides that, I love the story. Oh, and I vote for a sequel.
Not a bad story, it could use some remastering with the format.
I would love a sequel.
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Honestly i may just re-do the story, there's a lot I would change now. Glad you enjoyed this one anyway
Anime based story's make me cringe a lot.