Equestria is broken. Its leadership, crippled. Many have paid the ultimate price to fight the endless changeling swarms. Now ponies hold a desperate last stand against the onslaught.
Twilight Sparkle has a solution.
All it would take is one last sacrifice.
Duuuude.
Totally needs an epilogue of like, ten years later as they celebrate 'Rainbow Day' to celebrate the bravest most awesome pony to ever live.
That would be pretty darn awesome.
Did you have to utterly pulverize my Feels...?
Gonna finish during my lunch, but holy mother is this good so far. Definitely giving this a like and a fav and a follow.
I may even do my first audio reading on this story.
8088779 Thanks for the favourite, I really appreciate it. You let me know if you do make a reading on it, alright? :'D
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But of course.
Finished reading. Posilutely astounding. I could feel Twilight's anguish from start to finish. Truly a sensational piece in my book. Too bad I can't hit the like button, like, a bajillion times.
(Salutes) You did a good job today Rainbow. You really are the Element of Loyalty, now and forever.
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Wonderful and beautiful writing. I started getting choked up about halfway through before much was even said.
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you can, but it'd crash the fimfiction servers. It'd involve using clicker bots and be named an attack on the server,
Did... Rainbow Dash turn herself into a nuke...?
God... that so metal...
Rainbow Dash... you truly are the most loyal pony ever...
This was absolutely fantastic! However, i do think an epilogue of like a few years later would be a great addition.
*Adds to Favorites
You just transformed a dumb pun into a sad triggerer.
This totally needs an epilogue.
Epilogue memorial. Damn, epic and hardcore to hell and then kicked hell out for shiggles.
*Salutes Rainbow Dash*
So... emotional. This is a masterpiece sir, I take my hat off to you.
I've added this story to 2 groups,The Underappreciated Story Society and Buried Treasures (Stories that Deserve More Attention) – It's the least I can do.
I've also added it to my "Great" folded, alongside such stories as In Memory Of (a heart-wrenching story), and Stardust.
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Hey, cheers for that. I appreciate it. (^_^ )b
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You're welcome.