• Published 7th Apr 2017
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The Influence - GMBlackjack



Twilight Sparkle awakens in a mysterious room with a mysterious artifact - in a story where your comments influence the outcome.

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Author's Note:

[IMPORTING…] […Ponygood speaking. When I described Corot/Carrot, I didn't mean that he was an actual threat. Your story and the story he is in are seperate universes, and he absolutely does not exist in yours. If that were true, and all of Blackjack's stories mingled together, Pinkie Pie would be simultaneously a chaos god, trapped in a terrible alternate universe, and dead. You do NOT have to worry about Corot. And now, some meanings of names. Some, like Acket, Onyx, Uler, Fosis, and Estur, have no important meaning that I was able to find. Chrysocholla is similar to chrysocolla, which is a crystal known to our magical wackjobs as a communication stone which also calms people. Heildor is similar to heliodor, which our magical wackjobs believe leeches toxins from the body. And, in case you're wondering, magical wackjobs are people in our world who believe, despite no known evidence of magic existing, that crystals can heal you and your chakras, and that Jews came to space on a metaphysical enlightenment spaceship. That is all the explanation I feel sane enough to give. I was not expecting the desert to be so... wierd. I can't think of anything to help you, except for the general advice of watch out for wierd magical things. Finally, upvotes are little things that are created when one of us click a little thumbs-up button on someone else's comment, and that tells everyone that someone "likes" that comment. This statement is directed towards Zen. I was thinking of saying it earlier, but Twilight beat me to it. Basically, thank you for being perhaps the sanest one of all of us and always thinking of the stupidly obvious things that none of us consider. Also, I have a large amount of respect for you for revealing at least a portion of your true identity. That is all… …nickel here. the interface is becoming a mess again, i thought it had calmed down. anyway, upvotes don't matter to you, they are a part of the interface on our end and due to the interface having been repurposed to reach you they have no bearing whatsoever on your situation. as for whats happening to you now, im more lost than you are in regards to what is happening, but it looks like you may have received some of those direct answers i mentioned before, if in a slightly unusual fashion. while ire is almost certainly not blackjack, it might be what in my worlds are known as fragments, a piece of the awareness and mind of your primary and such presences are often used for more direct influence and self inserts. that in no way gaurantees it knows everything or that it will feel like helping you, rather it means that there is little you can do to influence it if it doesnt feel like playing along, while most of my fragments tend to be either willing to help or stressed beyond reason i know nothing of what your primary will do with his, so good luck… …Spike here. Alright, I guess that's a good enough reason, and I got a laugh at 'Twinkle's' reaction to her nickname. And the fact that right now she's on a studying binge trying to find out more of how that 'Impossible' field exists. Speaking of, if you do figure out how it works, DON'T MESS WITH IT! I know how you get when you try to find out how things work. And to prove a point, just two words. Pinkie Sense… …afizha here. The town of Heildor might be a place of learning and knowledge. What the ‘magical whackjobs’ Ponygood11 is talking about is the heliodor crystal which means is this. A crystal of golden light, Heliodor radiates the warmth and power of sunshine, the illumination of higher thought, and a centered, more vibrant physical well-being. Its name literally translates from the Greek as a gift of the sun. Heliodor invokes the celestial Golden Ray of knowledge and learning, to stimulate the higher mind and enable the brain to function more efficiently. It is a stone of true nobility and selfless leadership and allows one to make decisions based on wisdom instead of emotion or reaction. Ahsian, 188 Yang in nature, Heliodor helps one develop aspects of the many virtues - assertiveness, self-confidence, physical and mental strength, benevolence and power. These traits serve both men and women. Simmons, 188 Heliodor is the yellow variety of the Beryl family, generally referring to the greenish-yellow crystal, but includes all yellow, yellow-green, light green and brown Beryl. Golden Beryl is a variety of Heliodor with a bright, pure yellow to golden yellow color. For the purpose of this article, we will refer to both as Heliodor except where the metaphysical properties may vary. While Heliodor and Golden Beryl are the yellow varieties of Beryl, the Beryl family also forms in other colors used as gems, such as Green Emerald, Blue Aquamarine, Pink Morganite, Red Beryl or Bixbite, and the colorless variety, Goshenite. That kind of crystal might be strewn all over heildor to promote knowledge growth or physical growth; I’m not certain… …josh here - sorry for bringing up upvotes like that; i know that wasn't the best moment for that but that is something that was happening for the start so you might understand my impatience. anyway upvotes are just part of a ranking system on our end, so no need to worry about it, but i have to point out that you can't vote on your own comment which means someone has been here from the start, and not only have they went out of their way to positively vote on everything everyone has said, but also have not said anything themselves, and i have to just ask them why? you're obviously invested what's happening so why not do something? also i'm more than a little creeped out... …Giginss here. I would highly recommend staying away from that artificial desert, as magical forcefields that spew lightning have a great risk of injury, or, depending on the power of the field, death. Or, perhaps, examine the magical circuitry. That circuitry sounds way out of place if you really are in the past, so either that is a long lost relic of an ancient civilization (your typical Daring Do book), or you are in the far future. That doesn't explain the town, though, and that annoys me with the inconsistencies. There must be something larger at play here, and we cannot see it yet. We must know more. Good luck… …AkumaKAMI here! Bwhaha! I'm sorry, I'm sorry! It's just....Twilight, I understand you have a lot of us to keep track of, I'm just wonder how mixed up Kami with Kira. I'm not upset or anything, it just amuses me! As for you, Ire, thank you for your information. I have only one important question at the moment- for future references, do you want your answers during the.....lets say, Inputting, right after you ask or do would wish us to wait until the next next one that happens during a dream with you? Either way, I'll give some answers now. I personally don't know much about Blackjack or his world. He has nine "stories" or universes, including this one. Technically speaking, the "Sweeper" is his by our own rules as its from one his universe. Three of them are "oneshots." Essentially meaning that what we perceive of that universe is very brief, even if it covers a long time. Some are summaries of the lives of entire worlds or universes, from start to finish. Other are just a moment in a day. One of that I have read involves another version of Twilight talking down Starlight Glimmer who had gone full nihilist thinking there was no point to anything anymore. I think Starlight was an alicorn in that one but I'm not sure. As for why Twilight? Its because that she has the most potential. At least, that's a common thought among us primaries. We were making worlds with Alicorn Twilight, Twicorn, long before we perceived the main Twilight Ascend.Okay, Twilight, Ire, both of you listen. There is something we call canon. That's the main branch, the Trunk if you will, the original universe that we first perceived Twilight and her friends from. I'm not to sure how long you've been in Ponyville Twilight, but we first saw that seven years ago.
Why is this import for you, Ire? These Universes, these stories, are made from that original timeline. Of course, you didn't exist there. Wether we create universes or just find and manipulate isn't really the important part to figure out. From that original timeline, That Trunk, we mold and twist the branches to fit one thing: An idea. We don't see everything of your world, Twilight. Not the original one. We humans are curious, imaginative creatures that always wonder How, What If, and What Else? Viewing new canon occasionally fills in some blanks, but we sometimes fill them in on our own and those are sometimes dark and twisted. Like Rainbow Factory. But for a more detailed instance, we never saw most of your friend's parents for the longest time. So many of us pondered that some of you were orphans or had a bad homelife. To this day, most of us are very sure that Applejack's parents are dead, but we recently saw that Rainbow's are not. Due to Discord's lack of backstory, many have imagined him as being Starswirl gone crazy, having been abused and mistreated for his appearance, or even that him and Celestia were lovers gone wrong. Albiet, most of the romantic ideas around Discord have moved over to you and Fluttershy. You yourself, Twilgiht, have had been fiddled with the most. You've been the daughter(biological or adopted) or descendant of Celestia, Luna, Sombra, Discord, and Chrysalis on different occasions. On unrelated times, you've also been a lover to each of those as well. Sometimes more than one at once. You've also turned evil, and in at least one story, you were raised by dragons. You've also turned against Celestia several times, but those were mostly Tyrantlestia and Molestia fics- lets just say bad versions of Celestia. A few of were also Celestia gone a bit crazy, Yet, the What If is the most tantalizing of questions to us. Its, essentlly, making the trunk of the tree split at any given point we desire to see a major off branching. A common one is if Celestia had gone Nightmare instead of Luna, or Luna hadn't been insane and actually rebelled or seceded from Equestria,or if Celestia had a different student. Or changing a single concept in the timeline. Other times, the change is more....foreign. We take something from an entire other canon and drop it into yours. These are Crossovers, or Xovers. Sometimes this is sudden, literally dropping a character or object into Equestria, other times its more subtle, melding the worlds more seamlessly, to some extent. Such as Celestia and Luna(and Discord) having been from another world and either traveled to the pony world and took pony form or simply reincarnated there. Or that one canon's world comes before or after the timeline of Equestria by distant ages. Or they simply exist as planets in the same universe. Due to you not caring about the "insignificants", I doubt this'll be much help to you, Ire. The only thing we humans love to imagine and create gods as much as we enjoy giving heroes and villains rise up and tears them down. I think there's a reason why that one universe called us a subspieces of Draconequus. Well, sorry Twilight, I probably just fried you're brain. Any way.....I'm with you on the Band. What the actual bucking Tartarus? Is that to keep people out or is that to keep something trapped? Akumakami out!… …Damn it, Akuma! I had an entire convoluted plan to get Ire to Pinkie Promise to interact with Twilight in exchange for information! Did your patents ever teach you to not trust rude dream strangers? Shame on your face… …Shrugs. While a bit rude to Twilight, Ire has been relatively polite to us and threw out an olive branch so we'd stop accusing them of being the Sweeper, so I threw out one as well. Albiet, its a big branch.....Why am I using so many tree metaphors today?… …Keyandthelocks is currently offline… …Ponygood again. Our interface, which we use to read about and communicate with you, has underwent a massive change, courtesy of its administrators. This likely won't affect you, but it may affect all of us, including Blackjack. You have been notified…]

Twilight sighed. “Afizah is trying to freak me out again with incidental information that doesn’t matter.”

Fluttershy blinked. “Oh?”

“Horror universes, I think. I don’t need to know about them, Afizah - Akumakami told me all I needed to know about the way these universes are made and what they are like in his huge speech... Which, by the way, was rather disturbing. I’m sorry I got your name wrong Akumakami - but what the actual heck? I’m not talking about the canon trunk, or the short one-shot snippets, or the prediction of my ascension - I’m talking about what are you all thinking? Romances? Just... why? Does Discord LOOK interested in anyone? Do I look interested?”

Fluttershy tried to stifle a laugh at the image in her head.

Twilight bristled. “You wouldn’t be laughing if you knew that, since they’re mentioning it, a universe exists where I’m falling head over hooves for that snake. I mean... I mean...” She twitched, shaking her head. “Argh, I told myself I could handle it...”

“Strange how this is the part that bothers you and not the fact that the entire world could just be changed around you for whatever reason Blackjack wants.”

“Fluttershy, if I start acting lovey-dovey, hit me. Hard.”

“...Sure...?”

“Thank you.” Twilight shook her head and returned to her thoughts. “Let’s see... Why are all of you calling her Ire? The name was Ine - unless there was a glitch in what you saw. That’d be annoying, hope she isn’t mad about that... Also it’s no problem, Josh, I was just curious about upvotes, it wasn’t a problem. You don’t need to worry about anything.”

“...Ine...” Fluttershy said. “...What do they say about her?”

“They said a lot of things to her - why exactly are we calling her a her anyway? - but not much about her. Nickel suggested she was a self-insert for Blackjack, an essence of their mind or something, but I don’t think so. I think Ine is exactly what she said she was - part of this world just as we are...” She frowned. “I was actually hoping Key would be able to shed some light on that, but he’s apparently offline for some reason... Which worries me... Maybe the new interface they mentioned messed with him?”

“I’m sure he’ll be back. Don’t worry.”

“Yeah... I know you’re right. There was a lot of information about Moissan names and magic superstition - not immediately useful and... Surprisingly judgemental. I tink we won’t need it until we end up in Moissan - If we end up in Moissan...” She looked back at the forcefield that was the band. “...Otherwise, I think we’ve got to deal with this... Learn more about it, but be cautious, like the other Spike suggested. ...Though I could probably enter the magical field itself... Get a closer look at the circuitry down there...”

Fluttershy bit her lip. “Twilight... Do you think you could learn anything useful down there?”

“...Not really...” She looked down at the glowing colors far beneath the earth. “...Probably should ask for more information around town first...” The two mares turned their gaze to the towers of Acket in the distance. They saw a bolt shoot up from the band behind it. “I wonder how the claw-like parts stay together on top of the band...”

“Let’s go ask,” Fluttershy said.

“Yeah. Let’s-” Twilight’s ears perked up - she turned to look at the way they had come. She saw a white unicorn in the distance that looked familiar...

Infinity.

“...Yep, she’s following us.”

“Let’s get in and out of the town quickly.”

“Agreed.”

They trotted off towards the towers...

~~~

Acket... was a place, that was for sure. The structures were dominated by tall, pearly white towers that rose to a single point high in the sky. Streets weaved in and out, between the towers - some streets even being suspended like bridges from tower to tower. There was no obvious center to the city - the place sprawled out along the band’s edge like a semicircle, with a few long bridge-like protrusions sticking out over the sands of the band, angled in such a way that they came to a point like claws ready to clamp down on the shifting sands below. Only one of these ominous black spines was in view of Twilight and Fluttershy - and they barely paid it any mind, instead drawn to the image of life inside the city. The pearly structures - and roads - seemed like ordinary building materials at first, but whenever someone stepped, knocked, or touched it with any sort of significant force a soft, greenish light would appear, like a burst of smoke that dissipated in under a second. Twilight could easily imagine the city being rather bright at night simply due to this effect.

There were many lantern-like globes floating around in the city, tethered to a tower or road by a long, copper cable. Twilight looked around, grin slowly getting bigger and bigger as she saw more and more details - vehicles that didn’t need to be pulled by ponies, pods that shot up tower’s edges automatically, and - some flat glass-thing that displayed images... Extremely fuzzy images, granted - a magic display spell would be better - but the novelty came in that it was working without a spell.

“Fluttershy... Do you know what this means?”

“There’s like one dragon for every twenty ponies here?”

Twilight blinked. “Well, yes, I suppose. I mean - the power! These ponies have a form of energy they can harness - much like the electricity in Manehattan, though here it appears much more... plentiful.” She rubbed her hooves together. “I wonder how many innovations they have here...”

A small void-black dragon - smaller than Twilight - appeared, smiling brightly. He appeared much more like the kind of dragon Twilight was familiar with - four legs, two of which could serve as hands if the dragon decided to walk upright, and a pair of wings. “Ah, I see your attention has been drawn to our unique devices!”

“Uh...” Twilight made sure her cloak was on tight, so he couldn’t see the wings. “Yes, actually. What can you tell us about the devices of Acket?”

He laughed. “You certainly asked the right dragon! Names Verdant, you might call me... a tour guide slash techie. What we have here is a place built on the foundations of what the ancients left behind - the ever-mysterious band itself. Draining the magic bolts that erupt using the Spires, we channel the power into the very ground we stand on, which has been given the ever-inspired name of Pearlstone - or Calcium Carbonate Thau if you want to listen to the big-word scientists. We draw everything we need from the Pearlstone, and there’s so much extra it comes off in these green wafts!” To illustrate his point, he scratched the ground, a soft green mist rising into the air before dissipating. “Pure magic energy, that.”

Twilight’s eyes widened. “...Can you make this stuff?”

“Sadly, no, it’s only found under the band itself - but there’s so much of it down there we won’t be running out for centuries,” he laughed. “We use it to power our trams, our rails, our screens, and even some of our farms! You’ll notice there aren’t many fields on the outskirts - that’s because we grow what we need in the buildings, in controlled environments. Watermelon, year round!”

Fluttershy blinked. “That’s... impressive.”

Twilight squeed. “Oooooh I’d love to get my hooves on this stuff and do some tests!”

Verdant reached into his satchel and tossed her a marble made of Pearlstone. “Bigger stuff will cost you - just because it’s plentiful doesn’t mean it’s cheap - but you seem like the type to appreciate the finer properties. Just charge it with your own magic, it’ll retain it until you mess with it.”

Twilight pushed her own magic into the little marble - easily fitting enough for a short range teleport - and then held it out at leg-length. It was wafting off steamy energy like the other Pearlstone around, except it was purple instead. “That’s... That’s amazing. I could teleport anytime I wanted with this thing... It’s hardly losing any energy at all... This could replace crystals...”

Verdant blinked. “I’m... Sorry?”

“Oh,” Twilight smiled sheepishly. “I’m sorry, I assumed those were a thing here. We’re from... Really, really far away. We don’t have this there - but we can find gemstones buried in the earth infused with certain magics. We can’t control what we find in them, but we sure can use it.”

“Interesting... Would you happen to have any on you...?”

Twilight shook her head. “Sorry. This stone is better anyway - it stores what you want it to store. That’s amazing...”

Verdant smirked. “You seem to be an intellectual. Surprised to see one of your kind so far from home. Where you from? Because there’s like six places that spawn intellectuals in the known world, and you don’t fit the bill for any of them.”

Twilight smiled nervously. “Up north... Waaaaay north. I’m really not sure on specifics, we’re pretty lost.”

Verdant raised an eyebrow. “Ah... Trying to get home through the Desert then?”

“...Well, I suppose that’s an option...” Twilight said.

“We’re mostly curious about the Ancient ruins,” Fluttershy said. “We were seeing if there was a way to cross the band here or not.”

“Well...” Verdant furrowed his brow. “There’s a crackpot by the name of Sand Blaster who’s got a Pearlstone sandship... Claims it can get you across in a day. Otherwise, you gotta go around - the bolts are attracted to anything that flies over them. Including you. I guarantee your magic shielding isn’t going to be enough. Then again, you might want to brave it instead of xenophobic dogs or an ocean of Kraken.”

“Hrrm...” Fluttershy said. “Can you take us to Sand Blaster?”

“Wait, Fluttershy, what if we stay a bit, see the sights? This place... We’re not in a rush, are we?” Twilight asked.

“I don’t know...” Fluttershy said. “I think it’d be best to be faster...”

Verdant smirked. “I can show you to a hotel if you-”

Any sort of regular domestic conversation that would have occurred was silenced instantly by an explosion - one of the taller towers exploded in a powerful purple fire, shattering into a fine powder. Twilight braced for shrapnel - encasing the three of them in a shield - but no shrapnel came, just dust. The entire thing had been vaporized.

Verdant looked up. “...Damn...” Fluttershy and Twilight followed his gaze - there was an object floating far above them, made of a similar metal to the ancient relic Twilight had seen in the forest, glowing with the same energies as well. It appeared almost like a butterfly - a sequence of four rings with a vaguely square shape in the center. It seemed to be watching them from far, far above - Twilight paled when she realized how high up it was. Multiple miles - and they could still see it and make out details. How big was it!?

And then Twilight felt a warmness in her chest. “Fluttershy, it’s happening-” She stopped short - she saw Infinity looking at them accusingly in the middle of a panicking crowd of ponies and dragons...