Somedays, I sit, looking at the stars. I muse and wonder. I meditate and reflect. And I find the miracle in a new day of life. Especially since I swallowed so much glass the day before.
An older, bitter Pegasus stands on the edge, pondering her life and questioning her decisions - but Scootaloo has only one final choice to make. Will her haunted past finally make her take that final step, or will she find a different way out?
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>starting on a cliff edge.
You're playing a dangerous game, sir.
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I'm not the one playing that game, am I? =D
Silly Kitsune! cartoons can't take fall damage!
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Then this fic would never have ended badly =D
I don't know Scootaloo sadfics aren't exactly my my favorite.
But it was beautifully written, and I enjoyed it.
I found this story kind of empowering. Thumbs up!
Meh. I don't read sadfics. I'm always disappointed.
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Ah... give this one a go. It might be different. =)
Maybe you won't like it ultimately, but... the theme is 'hope'.
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Oh I already read it. It didn't have the "tragedy" tag, after all. And you tend to keep it real with dark themes. Enjoyed it for what it was.
Found the literal metaphors hard to relate to. Then again, Scoots is made of literal metaphors...
I want to throw the sad tag in a fire and replace it with a drama tag.
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Tragedy for me is when a WHOLE BUNCH of really bad things happen to one character over the course of their life.. so.. well maybe this one should have had it. Hah!
And yeah, I did get very flowery with this one. But it's just to illustrate the sort of state of her mind. As you know from my other writings, I try to write specifically to show how characters view the world through the narration as well. It's just meant to be a short wavy piece... and open to any kind of interpretation that doesn't necessarily have to sync with mine.
If they had a... I dunno. Bittersweet tag? Melancholy? Maybe those'd work better.
Drama's nice too, but when I think of drama I think of Days of our Lives. .... hm.... Fic idea? =D
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Thank you for the kind words =) Glad you liked it!
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Sad, bittersweet, melancholy... are emotions, not genres. They can be themes, like tragedy or slice-of-life. Drama is the genre in which dramatic things happen and events are dramatized. Days of out Lives is a soap opera. Technically also "drama" but in a very specific niche.
My favorite thing about this fic was, like I said, your much more believable and realistic handling of dark themes. Also the duality; the running double meanings of what Scoot was trying to do.
What I didn't like was the concept that Scoot's flight issues were psychological. Not completely unbelievable, but not really believable. I also disliked her level of intensity of obsession with Rainbow. While again, not entirely inconceivable, not really the way I'd consider it.
By literal metaphors, I did not mean to slight your writing style, I was literally talking about the literal metaphors of the concepts and events of this story. Your writing is quite nice. Ornate but articulate.
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Oh, I get it now. Yeah, I just broadened it up, really. I don't think genre by itself is capable of really 'marking' a fic, because, yes, personal hangup, ALL FORMS OF HORROR ARE EQUAL AMIRIET? Grrrrrr. But yes, specific niches of genres is what would be... good? I don't know. I must admit to not thinking about this too much. And for that reason I never know how to tag anything I write properly.
Noted. Although, as I said, it's rather open to interpretation. I didn't want to tie anything down, so I didn't specifically say outright that anything was anything. It's meant to be slightly unreliable anyway, rose-coloured glasses and all that. But points taken, definitely. For the Rainbow issue, I have no excuse. I was just taking my own percieved level of intensity with how much she liked her in the show. =) I mean... that rainbow dash scalp hat was rather freaky. Perhaps best to consider this an alternate take on the events in which her fears and obsessions ran a bit deeper than as portrayed in the actual show? That was my intention, anyway.
I didn't read it that way. No problems =)
Consarn it, I'm sure I removed all them chicken references on that last pass!
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Lol...
BUKAW! *SPLAT*
I get your frustration with horror being perceived that way. I personally blame the "grimdark" tag for that. It should never have been used for fic tagging and it does not apply to 90% of the fics that are tagged with it. It also, like the sad tag and shipping tag, unfortunately seems to legitimize (at least in the authors' minds) one trick fics without any integrity that play on the tag as the entire premise.
One of my favorite fics in the fandom is an atmospheric horror fic that I almost didn't read due to tag stigma. now THAT would have been a tragedy.
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Alternate Ending:
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And as the final squalks and cries of the once-mighty hen floated across the sea, she realised that chickens were never meant to fly for longer than thirteen seconds, which is of course, the world record for a chicken in sustained flight, if you were to believe that sort of thing. The Pegasus lasted twelve.
And as she plunged down, down toward the craggy rocks that awaited her below with open arms, awaiting to embrace her in their craggy talons, she never even felt her body stop where the land met the sea.
And then Scootaloo was a zombie.
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But yes, I've been seeing that 'Silent Shore'. I'll give it a try!
Out of curiousity though, what do you consider such 'one trick fics'? I'm trying to get a clearer definition.
Also, in the works is a proper well-on grimdark, which I think will be my first legitimate horror fic. Again, a lot of MacGuffins which will no doubt upset plenty, but the idea is to take what I did in Love.Sick and make that look tame. It's all about the mood, it's all about the mindset, it's all about the setting, and it's all about one very upset Creeping Darkness. I hope you will enjoy that one. I'm going to attempt to make it more 'ornate' like this one, but have very vivid single scenes of things that play on deep fears.
Although the trick is to balance gore and fear, isn't it? I don't want to do a Cupcakes.
The majority of clopfics, the majority of shipfics, the majority of gorefics, the majority of sadfics, the majority of dark/grimdark fics.
It's the difference between "I have a story to tell and that story is _" and "I am writing a _ story because _ stories are _". I don't begrudge a story it's themes, but a story should not be built around a story element. You want to write porn, gorn, or emotion porn for the sake of it, have fun. But no respect. I don't care how sad, gory or sexy your story is if it's a STORY first. Berserk is my fave thing ever after all.
Cupcakes was written because the author was sick of PinkieDash shipping spam. Sweet Apple Massacre was written because a brony was trolling someone in CoD. Rainbow Factory was written as a cheesy dark homage to a song (the author writes MUCH better than the quality of that fic. Her Mythbuckers is brilliant.)
These stories are loved, hated, popular, criticized and acclaimed, but in the end they are all written revolving around a story element and a concept that has a story supporting it instead of the other way around. That makes them a 1 trick fic.
A story in the "horror" genre is a story in the horror genre, not a horror in the story genre.
Love . Sick was not bad because it was the characters twisted by a curse. The premise was contrived, but that's to be expected. The ending was... a scenario of debatable integrity, but can be chalked up to surrealism.
That's my take on it anyway.
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Points taken, again. If it were up to you, what specifics would you change or have changed about the whole of the love.sick formula to make it more cohesive? I'm open to all criticisms, of course. I'm always looking out to make my next one a better one. =)
The idea for this next one would probably be just as contrived, but of course, as you know my writing focuses a lot on the journey rather than the message. But please do tell me where I might have done better or worse, if you have the time and are willing to help out a little.
If it helps, I could also give you a rough outline of the fic's general theme and plot, maybe that might help you see things I could avoid?
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Nah. Too much genre bias.
The main problems I had with Love . Sick were that the curse itself made no sense as "just something that happens to Celestia". Pinkie's scene (and Gummy's) made no real sense and was not up to the quality of the other scenes. The curse's effects on the others were in ways too retroactive, especially with Dash and her orgy group. And Celestia would never diddle Twi knowing that she could die from it. The death of any of the element bearers would mean Discord's eventual release and the end of Equestria. It's kind of an example of how I find darkfics let themselves go more than other stories. Just because bad things are happening does not mean the story has to give up trying to maintain integrity.
Otherwise you're just writing a Creepshow/Tales from the Crypt/Twilight Zone/The Outer Limits/Tales from the Darkside/Monsters episode starring pony characters. Not a FiM fanfiction.
The other issue is that much pony grimdark takes itself far too seriously.
This: i1.kym-cdn.com/profiles/icons/big/000/079/761/scootaloo%20murder.jpg is funny. It will always be funny. It will never be not funny. No mater how hard you try to make it gritty and scary and realistic, it will still be funny. The harder you try the funnier it gets. You can't win at grimdark pony. Noone can. Ever.
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Hm.. honestly, in the first place, I didn't intend for any of this to impact on any of the 'real lore' of the series. Perhaps I should have stated specifically that it was alternate-reality? While it isn't TECHNICALLY, I wrote it with the aim of it being a sort of 'horror story featuring the cast' rather than 'a horror story set in the universe'. The shoddily explained mechanics of the curse were quite intentional. The Pinkie scene aside, which could have used tweaking, the whole idea of the curse is that it is an excuse for whatever happened TO happen. What it was, or how it affected the world was slightly less consequential than the fact that the story is just a small piece of what I implied had been going on for ages and ages with many other ponies in Celestia's life, and that Celestia herself was a victim to it, much in the way that she couldn't do anything to prevent it from happening outside of suggesting that her current partner not go through with it.
It is meant to be on a surreal plane, certainly, and in no way, of course, did I attempt to 'bystep integrity' of the show. But in the first place, such a story wouldn't fit in with the canon, so I just decided to pluck it out and have it floating around on a rock in space, if you get what I mean.
I hope this all made sense, but if I had made this clearer, that it was a tale of... alternate belief, shall we say, would it have affected your reading and understanding of it?
The reason why I ask is that the next one I'm working on will have a device used as much to the same effect - something that I'm not really going to explain and is kind of 'you have to just take it for granted that it exists, and no one really will know much about it' that fuels the events. Is there any way you think that it might work under such constraints?
Edit after yours:
... very very ironically, that is the exact image I use for one of my chat program's icon.
And strange you mention those shows because... those shows are exactly what I have in mind when I write some of my fics. Like, the Little Town: Stone Spiral fic, that series is BASICALLY Tales from the Crypt. I really do love those conventions where you have to suspend your disbelief a little. I write with the journey in mind, not the finer details, and I know that doesn't sit well with some and does give NO closure whatsoever, but.. it's really strange you mention those in particular, because that's what I was going for exactly.
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Don't get me wrong. I get it. I really do. A lot of people love that stuff, and I enjoyed it in my own way. But to me, having the ponies in situations that don't on some level mesh with the themes of the show is like watching gay male porn. Nothing wrong with it and I'm sure it's hot to its intended demographic (lesbians, no I'm not kidding), but I just can't really relate.
The majority of the grimfic I've read was through MSTings.
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That said, there's nothing wrong with appealing to a wider audience =)
In this case though, I hope you will enjoy my other writings, because... well I ASSUME you do, you're always hanging around =D
But... ah. well. yes. I'll see what's gonna happen with this upcoming one. It won't be as 'out there' as a curse affecting Princess C, but... well. sinister things will happen nevertheless. No chainsaws, though. I draw the line at chainsaws.
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Well let's put it this way. There's gay porn, then there's 2 girls 1 cup. One isn't my thing. 1 needs to die in a bunnyfire. I don't think you need to worry about the bunnyfire.
And I hang around because Diaries is one of my fave fics ever. That, L.S, and now this are your only fics I've read so far. Although I plan to get to the others eventually.
You are actually the only author on FiMFiction who I watch of whom I do not have a story on FiMFiction favorited.
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I'll try to do better to win your love. I will. ;_;
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All according to plan.
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Tell you what though, I'm always open for ideas for my 'little town' series. If you wanna see something or have an interesting pitch... go ahead. =)
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Fluffy ponies come to town.
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Not realizing the addictive properties.
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And the eventual assimilation.
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In an endless cycle.
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You got it.
And yes. I mean it. =D
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Don't destroy your artistic integrity on my account.
Either way, check with this mad scientist first. He made them.
And semi comedic grimlight is as far as I'm willing to push things, tone-wise. Action oriented violence can go a bit further. Despite the fact I have extremely messy stuff in my head, I'm fine with it staying there. Well, off to bed. Nice chatting with ya.
And heaven forbid anyone actually comes to read the comments to get a feel for the fic...
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Oh, worry not.
I won't use the idea EXACTLY, but... already some similar lines of eeriness and general weirdness is appearing in my head. I probably won't be using the 'fluffy pony' but... something's there. Something. We'll see. And it shall be fun....
heh... ehh... heh ehe heh he hEH heheh hehh.. heh h
heh hehe
hehe.
Manly tears my friend... manly tears indeed.
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881953 u bastard u stel ican
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Can't hear you...
Wow... That was brialliant!
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Glad you thought so! Honestly, I wrote this ages ago. I think... maybe there are things I might have done better. But this was when I was still starting out, so I was still very rough back then. Glad that you still like it, though!
4196361 I find that piece wonderful. A lot of deep thoughts there... and such a nice ending. It was a great pleasure for me to read it and it sure deserves a fav and a thumb up from me.
4196361 Finnaly got around to reading your fics. I must say, this is lovely.
This was so sad, yet had the feels. I absolutely loved it
You don't see too many Scootacliff fics with happy endings and this one did. Favoriting, upvoting and following you!