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King of Madness


'One of Our Greatest Freedoms is How We React.' -A Cake-Obsessed Mole

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This story is a sequel to The Truth Behind Pinkamena


Pinkie Pie wakes up in her room. Everything seems normal, but she feels that something isn't right. So, she investigates.

What she finds... Well, you'll know when you read it.

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Comments ( 12 )

YUS! KEEP ON WITH THE STORIES!

I love it. best. story. ever.

8082007 Maybe I should make more Pinkamena stories. Just for you, brother. :raritywink:

8082485 (Clears throat.) Just for you, sister.

Lol. If u don't want to then you don't have to, but it would be nice to have something good to read. I've run out of those things, called GOOD STORIES! and U happen to be bringing in more. :pinkiesmile:

8084893 Thank you so much! That really touches my heart. :pinkiehappy:

BTW: Have you checked out my newest story, Derpy's Parent's Come to Visit? I would love to know what you think of it.

So, to answer why it would be T and mine kept an E is the following-

She was covered in blood

She wore a dress that looked like it was made from stitched together cutie marks, with several pegasus wings on the back of it. It was complemented by a necklace on unicorn horns. Pinkie felt sick just looking at it. She was standing on her hind legs and dragging around a giant mallet.

And that's only a few of the lines(the latter being the strongest reason). Also, your story is far more graphic in detail and is the whole thing that drives it while mine is mild and a flashback. That alone almost gets it a M but that's it. I'll admit, it is far better then mine but I hope that answers your question

8174575 Point taken.

Anyway, would you mind telling me what you thought of the story itself?

8174583 Well, it was interesting. I don't tend to read Dark fics often but the few I do peek my interest in terms of how people do it. It did will for what your going for but seeing as I'm already aware of Cupcakes(who isn't?), it's not as scary. Of course, it's hard to scare me so just my option.

8174591 Well, of course you know of Cupcakes. That's what I built this story on. And it's more to get you thinking than to scare you.

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