Search for the Unknown!
Equestria is a land full of mystery, wonder, and of course questions with answers hidden from the truth of the public's eyes. Follow one intrepid group searching for the truth in a seemingly peaceful town.
They may also be idiots who are taking this way to seriously.
This could be interesting...please, continue! Although some of the pony's dialogue could use more emotion and punctuation, it's very good.
For Example...
To This
AND...
THIS
TO THIS
So, punctuation could use work but that's it. You should do more!
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Thanks for the punctuation fix
I'm looking forward to more of this.
Will this get continued?