When Princess Luna was young, she was always under strict treatment from her parents. When she was taken away to be trained by the ruthless Pegasi, Luna's heart turned a little bitter. One day, she comes across a tribe of griffons and with them, Luna enslaved the Pegasi making them work in hard bondage. Soon, the great Goddess Amalthea sent a pony to lead the Pegasi to freedom.
This story was made with help from BlackHat6. It is sort of based on Dreamworks’ The Prince of Egypt.
Warning: This story contains religious themes. Please don't post rude or offensive comments!
Don't dislike it without a reason, thank you.
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Why did you delete my comment? It wasn't rude.
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I was to me.
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My apologies then. I'm sorry. I liked POE though. But, seeing Lu-Lu as evil as Seti was, is....strange. But, still, interesting idea. I do hope your other readers enjoy it. And, who knoes, I might read it in the future. Okay? And I'm sorry if I offended you.
I might read it. When I can handle it.
That was so Beautiful I Love this story so much.
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Glad you like it.