Chrysalis finds herself trapped in human form. She finds herself married to a human male. These insults will not go unpunished! The solution? World conquest, of course!
8096693 I really don't want to give too much away. I pretty much spent a lot of time while writing the prologue and the first chapter how to make the characters and their actions more believable. As the story progresses, I hope to convince the reader what they read in the first story was exaggerated.
If what I write works, I'll be happy. As long as the general reader feels as though their time reading this is well spent, that's all I need. If it fails, well, I'll take it for what it is, learn from the experience, and move on. I don't mind risking failure if the rewards are greater.
8096821 Amen. Amen. It's not that I don't find the concept amusing. But the first one to me felt like a Flanderized Crak Fic and I found it hilarious because of that.
But once this story started taking the concept seriously in a way. Well... I couldn't really laugh.
If I was in this guys position I would go to the ends of the Earth to try and get my revenge on Cadance, hell I would tell Crysalis all about how I feel of my situation and try to convince her that revenge is the best option. Hell I would gladly help her take over the world if it means that I can eventually have Cadance's head on a fucking PIKE.
You can argue that the whole point of this is that you cant change a bitch. OK, but what about someone with a temper to match? Making me the unwitting Guinea Pig on some Orwellian experiment to try and make emotions grow in a sociopath? YEAH....
Sorry, but forget the whole trying to make the whole marriage work, I would spend every waking moment trying to make Cadance's life a living hell, and if she is going to kill me the moment I try, fine, let her do it.
In fact, If the idea is that she is going to bestow upon me a greater and greater fate every single time I defy her, I will still do it. I will not give her the satisfaction of being right!
8096858 I think you'll enjoy the journey. There is a lot of influence from Greek mythology in concerning the alicorns. I do want more silliness and there will be more silliness. It's readers like you that I take the time to read their comments and take into consideration what is going into the story. This is because I know you care about what is going on and you have invested some interest in it.
The most important thing to me is entertaining my readers. The second thing (and it is a very close second) is that I enjoy guiding the reader along on the journey.
8096875 OK I gave you a favorite because you said Baba Yaga, and as a man that reads his legends from around the world, you just gave me a nerd tease that has already gotten me at half mast.
8097321 Right now, Starlight Glimmer has better control and access to her magic than Chrysalis does to hers. The story will go into detail in later chapters. In short, Starlight is more than capable of defending herself.
You know what...I kinda hope this ends with all four princesses being dumped, magicless and naked, in the middle of Antarctica, and I'm willing to keep reading til the end just on the hope that they get some sort of comeuppance. Especially Cadance.
Yeah, it's gonna be one of those kinds of stories...
why no link to the previous story?
8096289 Forgot to do that.
8096330 thank you for responding to my question
8096693 I really don't want to give too much away. I pretty much spent a lot of time while writing the prologue and the first chapter how to make the characters and their actions more believable. As the story progresses, I hope to convince the reader what they read in the first story was exaggerated.
If what I write works, I'll be happy. As long as the general reader feels as though their time reading this is well spent, that's all I need. If it fails, well, I'll take it for what it is, learn from the experience, and move on. I don't mind risking failure if the rewards are greater.
So is anything positive going to happen to Scott at some point or is he going to continue being constantly screwed over?
8096784 It's not all bad. He'll have some fun along the way. He just has to deal with the fact his wife is a bitch.
8096789
You forget to add megalomaniacal before bitch.
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@Zues Don't stick your dick in that!
#toolate.
8096821 Amen. Amen. It's not that I don't find the concept amusing. But the first one to me felt like a Flanderized Crak Fic and I found it hilarious because of that.
But once this story started taking the concept seriously in a way. Well... I couldn't really laugh.
If I was in this guys position I would go to the ends of the Earth to try and get my revenge on Cadance, hell I would tell Crysalis all about how I feel of my situation and try to convince her that revenge is the best option. Hell I would gladly help her take over the world if it means that I can eventually have Cadance's head on a fucking PIKE.
You can argue that the whole point of this is that you cant change a bitch. OK, but what about someone with a temper to match? Making me the unwitting Guinea Pig on some Orwellian experiment to try and make emotions grow in a sociopath? YEAH....
Sorry, but forget the whole trying to make the whole marriage work, I would spend every waking moment trying to make Cadance's life a living hell, and if she is going to kill me the moment I try, fine, let her do it.
In fact, If the idea is that she is going to bestow upon me a greater and greater fate every single time I defy her, I will still do it. I will not give her the satisfaction of being right!
8096858 I think you'll enjoy the journey. There is a lot of influence from Greek mythology in concerning the alicorns. I do want more silliness and there will be more silliness. It's readers like you that I take the time to read their comments and take into consideration what is going into the story. This is because I know you care about what is going on and you have invested some interest in it.
The most important thing to me is entertaining my readers. The second thing (and it is a very close second) is that I enjoy guiding the reader along on the journey.
The next chapter will have to do with Baba Yaga.
8096875 OK I gave you a favorite because you said Baba Yaga, and as a man that reads his legends from around the world, you just gave me a nerd tease that has already gotten me at half mast.
>. She's also an egotistical pain in the ass with a heart as cold as the heart of a glacier.
you are already downvoted.
8096905 I've seen worse reasons to downvote a story. Thank you for your thoughts and I hope you find something that tickles your fancy!
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Scott has a magic ring protecting him from being murdered by Chryalis, but what's stopping her from killing Starlight Glimmer?
8097321 Right now, Starlight Glimmer has better control and access to her magic than Chrysalis does to hers. The story will go into detail in later chapters. In short, Starlight is more than capable of defending herself.
All this does is make me want even more for Chryssie to make the entire thing go tits up and foil any and all of their plans, especially Cadance's.
And for Chryssie to sock Starlight in the face. Better magic civil be dammed, she's stronger and faster.
FOR FUCK SAKE GET FEATURED ALREADY! :P LOL!
Somehow, this ended up in the feature box.
I only have one thing to say about this travesty.
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J/K!
8098199 I just lost a roommate.
8098204
**Sad Hulk music plays as the hairy beast rolls himself down the road in his shitty cost-saving wheelchair**
Well, this would explain otherwise OOC behavior: These are not the ponies we're used to.
8098277 No, they're not. I do hope to entertain.
You know what...I kinda hope this ends with all four princesses being dumped, magicless and naked, in the middle of Antarctica, and I'm willing to keep reading til the end just on the hope that they get some sort of comeuppance. Especially Cadance.
Yeah, it's gonna be one of those kinds of stories...
Heh, there's something you don't see every day.