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Hodgepodge


"Darling darling darling!" said Twilight.

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To the outside, Rainbow and 'Shy are probably the perfect couple. They never fight. Never so much as raise their voices to one another.

And it's killing them.

What happens when two ponies can't talk about how they really feel?

Written for the Intelligent Shipping Discussion group's 'Made and Unmade' challenge. Contains a break-up.

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Woof. This story was too real.
You really nailed it : bad relationships aren't the ones where there's anger and shouting, but the uncomfortable, unstable ones that rots away like a dying flower.
Have a fave !

What happens when two ponies can't talk about how they really feel?

Well here in Britain we just go on the Jeremy Kyle show and shout at one another in front of millions of viewers.

Well written, but sad, and not my preference, but I was curious. I suppose this is a very possible outcome for them though.

8078731 I usually just trip over couches. It's really fun!

8080158 I prefer to put cuts in my back.

8080242 It helps the bad blood get out.

8080284 that makes sense!

8080291 I know you're being sarcastic, but still part of me believes you do understand.

8080340 it actually does make sense. i get it!

8081271 I'm going to give you a Follow, because you didn't make fun of me.

No! Fluttershy! You can't just say your okay with this! Do something!:pinkiehappy:

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