• Member Since 4th Apr, 2017
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Straight to the point


I simply wright for fun and hoping to improve in writing more and more, and any thumbs down please explain to me why so I can improve

Comments ( 26 )

8389702
It depends, I think I could add for death gag or something... I still didn't decide sadly :applejackconfused:

8395687
I did read the story.

The fact sweet tooth in there is kinda silly to me :twilightblush:

But still was good read

8395711
Eh it's okay. There really isn't many TM x MLP stories on the site

8395758
Hopefully, it will get noticed in a good way and someone better than me write something more intense :pinkiecrazy:

Hey, I just have to say I love twisted metal and mlp and you blended them very well, from the first chapter I was hooked and now im eagerly waiting for more

8396418
I appreciate that friend, and I will try to please :twilightsmile:

and thanks for the fav :rainbowdetermined2:

8675714
Aye, I will

but it will be tricky seeing how life and my car knowledge find a way to stop me

8718710
... I know a... few guys that could help with the car knowledge.

8718727
Appreciated friend, but till I hit a dead end I will wait for the right time... thankfully life gave me time to breathe now I am trying to see if I can write the next chapter without the need to detail anything car related

I hope to read next chapters soon...I'm waiting to see how the story will develop :D

FINALLY! I was waiting for this :D

The interview was kinda interesting...and I liked the backstory of Vynil and Octavia.

I don't know how Cheerilee will welcome back the main character after what he said during the podcast. I'm intrigued.

Nice work pal :)

8866261
Thanks, buddy, well the interview was meant as a way of learning who winning this far, so ponies decide in whether he is worth betting for him or not

and we will see what the teacher will do to the student :derpytongue2:

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