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Masterweaver


Just an average insane brony, doing average insane things. Professional Fanfiction Writer and Purveyor, relevant links are on my profile page.

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Octavia had hit a block in her musical career. She just can't figure out any new songs to write. And all the tricks she's tried to come up with something new are just failing. Vinyl Scratch, worried about her, puts her in contact with a friend who just might have the very thing she needs....

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This was actually good.

Like real good.

Better than what I'm coming up with at least.

Okay.

Surprisingly deep and poetic given the basic material. Most Sharktavia stories focus on, well, the shark aspect. You've struck a balance here, channeling that carcharodonic ferocity through a more elegant lens, bringing about a synthesis of the savage and the sublime that perfectly captures the events of the story.

I'd say good luck, but I don't think you're going to need it.

This was fantastic.
I loved Octy's experiences under water. Not to mention her slow change into a shark.
Gods Octavia makes for a good shark.

:rainbowlaugh:

"Why are you not panicking?!"

"I had to give up my sense of concern to get to my position. I'm literally incapable of giving a feather." She giggled, reaching under the counter, and pulled out a large net. "Come on, time's a-wastin'! We gots us a shark to catch!"

"Ugh." Vinyl sighed, leading her out. "I swear, if it wasn't for what happened when we met, I'd probably think you needed to be committed or something."

"Oh I probably do."

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

-Ru

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