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BROKEN MIRROR
THE END
Written by
G. M. Blackjack
Adapted from Keywii_Cookies55's Broken Mirror
Used with permission.
Starring
Pinkie Pie as the Psychotic Bundle of Energy
Rarity as the Reluctant Warrior
Minuette as the Jerk With a Heart of Gold
Fluttershy as the Idealistic Leader
Twilight as the Questionable Mind Game
Rainbow Dash as the Token Disabled Teammate
The Inspector as the Unicorn Moirail
Applejack as the Closest to the Original
Starlight as the Ninth Ranger
Diane as the Ironic Empath
Maud as the Emotionless
Soarin as the Doomed Commander
Spitfire as Fire Equals Military
Quota as the Smart, Yet Dumb
Amplify as the Small Fish Villain
Sunset as the Purge Queen
Farundael as the Domino Effect
Zecora as the Lost Soul
Foci as the Basement Dweller
Celestia as the Reluctant Monarch
Luna as the Shady Ruler
Discord as the Statue of Consolation
Anubis as the Religious Nutjob
The Doctor as the Scientific Nutjob
Lime as the Hulk
Marble as the Only Happy Concrete
The Nightmare Fuel as Sealed Evil in a Can. Again.
M as the Philosopher Narrator
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic belongs to Hasbro
Any other franchises referenced belong to their respective owners.
Special thanks to…
Keywii_Cookies55 (of course)
Bleeding Raindrops
Crimson Dawn
Ponygood11
...for following this story, for commenting, for leaving edit suggestions, and for the support. This is the story I am the proudest of out of all that I've written, and I'm glad I got to share it with you.
Where do I go from here? Probably my huge project, Songs of the Spheres. Hopefully, that will soon become the work I am most proud of, but until then, here Broken Mirror stands.
-GM, master of done.
~~~
>>Of course, the story goes on from there. They all had many more adventures - but I think it's best left at that, don't you?<<
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Man, what a ride. It's such a surreal, though good, feeling to have a story of your reimagined. Like, from the beginning, I knew it was going to be great. Primarily because I was updated on it's rough draft progress, but it was still amazing to follow.
Thanks again for doing this, it means everything to me.
Man. What a wild story that was! Started reading about 25 hours ago and couldn't stop, despite also attempting to do my college homework. Thanks for the amazing story, my hella bro!
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed! Put a lot of sweat and tears into this one!
-GM, master of sweet bacon.
Oh, cool. I'm in the credits. That's new.
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I'm afraid the question is lost on me.
Fluttershy and Twilight arguing is fine. You've been building that since you introduced them. No I was talking about the others.
Ultimately it's your story, and I often say that a true artist need only please himself.
That said, I've felt that this story was rushed ever since the destruction of Neighagra falls, and that belief still hasn't changed. This needed to be longer.
Although I agree with others that felt it was a little rushed. The world was really interesting. I wouldn't have minded for the fic being longer. However, it was still a pretty good story and very enjoyable one. Have a like from me!
Was interesting to see completely different universe, with point of divergence quite afar. It is not when Luna managed to can Nightmare on her own. Something went different in times of Smart Cookie and Private Pansy. What happened to windigos? Probably, disunity of races had affected night princess' selfesteem.
Only qquestinable thing about visible differences was why Element of !agic was separated from rest?
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I followed the "Celestia had the Element of Magic all along in canon" theory, just because I liked it. If you want another explanation, she kept it to use it herself.
-GM, master of PCP.
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so... what, he realized it was possible to be wrong so he just changed his entire set of goals or something? I trust that thing about as far as I can type a line of code (which is not far).
Yay great story i think I read it a bit too fast but what ever I love to read especially great adventures such as this
The action the drama the characters that actually die all great things
I love when a story has so much character it's not the ability that make a character it's the flaws (insert thoughts of mlp song flawless here) and Boy Did Your charecters Have flaws SO many FLaws THat made THis stort so Much More Fun To readd
You Took mlp and Carefully Sorted Out ITs Charecters INto A Awesome New Story Everything seemed Perfectly Balenced
Ps Sry for The Shitty Way This Reads Kindle Is Stupid And Slow Too Much Effort To Make It Nice ALso Im A Scatter Brain
W8 where's the end credits scene?
Gr8 story btw
was sad twilight became a paraplegic
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3 years ago I said something, you reply to it like I know what you're talking about.
Lol
Thanks for the clarification, but I don't know what you're referring to.
I really enjoyed this story. I do think that after Neighagra Falls fell, it felt unnecessarily rushed. However I think the world you built up and the characterization you gave to everybody kept me reading.