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PirateCattheShipper


Hilo! ANY suggestions for stories are available!I love to make friends with you wonderful people in the fandom and are always open to conversation and your advice!You may know me from DA, Piratecat102

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When Trixie Lulamoon's wagon's wheels freeze in a snowstorm, she is shunned from heat and gets stuck in her excuse for a home. Somepony realizes that Trixie had been strangely absent that day, and will trek through the cold to find the love of her life. Will she succeed? Will Trixie freeze to death? The questions will lurk in each ponies' minds. . .

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Comments ( 17 )

"Trust me. Somepony would have noticed her. Now," Twilight wrapped a foreleg around Starlight's bristling neck and said with a smile; "come and join us."

Murphy: Too bad I already made sure the place was desolate. No one is going to see Trixie unless they actively look for her. Sometimes, I really hate my job.

I like what you have going so far, but you need to put spaces between the paragraphs. Basic formatting errors like that are really distracting.

In fact, I just looked through your other stories and all of them have the same problem. Please consider fixing it; your readers will thank you.

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Oh, alright.


Thank you so very much!! :heart:

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You think I don't know that? :rainbowlaugh:

Trust me, it will turn around.:pinkiehappy:

Great, can't wait for the rest :twilightsmile:

Pretty good I'm enjoying it so far.

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Currently I am working on it!! And thank you so much!!:heart::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::twilightsmile::scootangel:

Wow. If you know you are going out, go out on your own terms, I guess. Please hurry, Starlight.

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I can't tell if you like the story or you are just being plane rude to me:applejackconfused:

8141020 I'm sorry.:fluttershysad: I didn't mean to sound rude.:fluttercry: I like this story. I was just saying if you know your time is coming up, leave on your own terms, as well as, asking Starlight to hurry and find Trixie before it's too late. That's all.

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Oh:scootangel:

It's 100% A-OK:rainbowkiss: You seem like a really nice person:twistnerd:

I love how you feel strongly for my writing and also feel the need to yell at the characters...When they are acting as if they would in the show:pinkiehappy:

Jesus, what a turn! The story is coming out great! :twilightsmile:

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Omccb THANK YOU SO MUCH!! The next chapter is nearly done!:pinkiehappy:

This was a very touching story. I wish we would have gotten to see Starlight tell Twilight 'I told you so' and Twilight's reaction to Trixie dating her student. I don't know why I was not notified that this story was updated.:pinkiecrazy:

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Aw!! Thank you so so much for the support!:twilightsmile::heart:

And yes, I'm sure she will do that :rainbowlaugh:

And after I finish An Alternate Nightmare I just might do that...Like a better version of Starlight's Confessions :rainbowlaugh:

Left for dead 2 is a great game.

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