• Published 1st Apr 2017
  • 5,861 Views, 35 Comments

The Shy Apple - Oldtakufanboy



It's hard to say that I'm in love with a person or in this case, a pony. I'm a very shy person, but I have to man up and tell her eventually

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Comments ( 19 )

Esta fue una gran historia te felicito

Was minda hoping they would have a kid but this is good to good job

I was hoping that this story was a little longer, oh well. Nice work.

Another nice story. I like it a lot.

Very nice! I really like your stories!

Comment posted by TriforceAndroid deleted Apr 10th, 2017

I didn't even read this for the clop... ok maybe a little for the clop, but mostly for the plot... kinda

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Gotta love the plot

This is what im talking about, i think these multi chapter fics is when your writing truly shines. More of these please.

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You really think so?

8102902 Yes i do, however some of your one-shot fics are just as good, but these ones i think just come out better, at least thats how i think about them.

I feel honored to share my name with the main character but I go by the formal form of it.

I don't normally enjoy human-in-Equestria stories (I have the bad luck of picking really bad ones) but this was well done. One of the better AJ centric stories I've read as well. Short, simple, and straight forward, and not too heavy on purple prose. Just the right amount of erotica to the plot. There were a few points that could have been worded differently, and a couple of moments that came off as a little rough, but still a good read.

Now, here's the thing...is that all you got? :fluttercry:

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Is that all I got of what? Clopfics? Or ones with AJ?

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AJ. I liked this one.

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Maybe in the future, I'll write another, but not now.

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