Well glad there be No Amon A Miss incident in this story world. But think the sisters should be told on what Susnet been thru and how vernable she is. The CMC could try to make her a big sister to them to help her heal.
That be a touching scene she burst into tears and hug all three, I bet.
I thought that this would be the final chapter but I see there is one more to go and I still hope for a happy ending. I did like Sunset's answer to when Twilight asked if she was willing to give them a second chance. Also I seriously hate Trixie in Equestria Girls especially with what she did in this chapter. Seriously Sunset and the others could have gotten their arms or necks broken and most likely die of starvation being locked up if no one bothered to look for them!
I see that you used the canon element for Sunset. I honestly didn't understand it and didn't like since in my opinion I figure Sunset's element would be either Hope or Redemption. Or maybe Forgiveness. But when I read up on what Empathy meant I guess it works.
This has been good and I hope to see the end soon.
Again, I was about to jump to conclusions and raid the holy lands to find you but then I remembered that Sunset actually has an element now... I have never been a fan of "Main character gets the ?th element of harmony cause they is great and should be poneh princess" trope but you actually made it work in the canon of the movies(Mostly thinking about Sunset´s powers in EQG4 and all that) soooo no complains here. Like you wrote in the authors notes about the ending was fairly accurate but you do what you gotta do to make it work. I will still be here pestering with gif/memes though and I can not wait for the next story to arrive! media.giphy.com/media/994Jbb333LSDu/giphy.gif
8095223 I was wondering when you and your gifs/meme were gonna show up . I still have one chapter left in this story that will overlap slightly in the sequel so that I can tie everything together. I may have to print out this story and "book 4" to be able to get everything lined up right.
Well glad there be No Amon A Miss incident in this story world. But think the sisters should be told on what Susnet been thru and how vernable she is.
The CMC could try to make her a big sister to them to help her heal.
That be a touching scene she burst into tears and hug all three, I bet.
I thought that this would be the final chapter but I see there is one more to go and I still hope for a happy ending. I did like Sunset's answer to when Twilight asked if she was willing to give them a second chance. Also I seriously hate Trixie in Equestria Girls especially with what she did in this chapter. Seriously Sunset and the others could have gotten their arms or necks broken and most likely die of starvation being locked up if no one bothered to look for them!
I see that you used the canon element for Sunset. I honestly didn't understand it and didn't like since in my opinion I figure Sunset's element would be either Hope or Redemption. Or maybe Forgiveness. But when I read up on what Empathy meant I guess it works.
This has been good and I hope to see the end soon.
Good Luck pabrony83.
8094583 I tried all different emotions/traits to try fit the bill, but none of them worked with the other 2 movies other than Empathy.
Again, I was about to jump to conclusions and raid the holy lands to find you but then I remembered that Sunset actually has an element now... I have never been a fan of "Main character gets the ?th element of harmony cause they is great and should be poneh princess" trope but you actually made it work in the canon of the movies(Mostly thinking about Sunset´s powers in EQG4 and all that) soooo no complains here. Like you wrote in the authors notes about the ending was fairly accurate but you do what you gotta do to make it work. I will still be here pestering with gif/memes though and I can not wait for the next story to arrive! media.giphy.com/media/994Jbb333LSDu/giphy.gif
8095223 I was wondering when you and your gifs/meme were gonna show up . I still have one chapter left in this story that will overlap slightly in the sequel so that I can tie everything together. I may have to print out this story and "book 4" to be able to get everything lined up right.
8095233 Another chapter? Fucking sweet! i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/masonry/001/241/334/ec9.gif
Sounds like a fun thing trying to piece everything together so I can only wish you the best of luck! a2.fanbread.com/uploads/image/file/78679/extra_large_giphy__19_.gif?637c3fcba864f5d3c103a86c1d8027af