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obake


I am a member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints, a Doom wad author, and avid brony. I both write and review fanfcitions, and I can't wait to begin submitting.

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This story is a sequel to Ponies Playing Doom


Note, this story contains spoilers for the game Doom III and its expansion packs.

Alternate title: They Played I and II, Now Ponies Play Doom III

It wasn't long ago that Equestria squared off against the denizens of Hell. Now, Hell is back for revenge, this time with someone new in charge.

The two sides are ready for battle. The question is, will the victors be standing on four hooves, or two?

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 11 )

So, when will Doom 4 story come out

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After this one is done, which should not be too much time. I'm planning on keeping this one short, perhaps five or six more chapters.

Sorry, I don't know how could I miss the new (well, new for two months) story of yours! I l really enjoyed your "Ponies Play Doom", and I hope this one will be even better!

Now, let's start reading...

I just can't stop smiling. This is great.

8151355 Thanks so much for your super kind words! :twilightsmile:
I am currently writing the next chapter.

8151355 Also, thanks so much for following!

When overall story is mostly serious and kinda epic, Dave fits in just in time to make me laugh. Seriously, he's the best comic-relief I've seen in quite some time!

Go on, glad to see chapters coming out so frequently.

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Thanks so much for your kind words. Your comments mean so much to me! :pinkiehappy:

I'm not sure if this one is as fun as previous ones, but it's surely interesting. Keep up!:twilightsmile:

Okay, I've finally returned from a voyage and am ready to express my thoughts.

Firstly, the story's easy to read. Both stylistically and technically. I'm not that strong in English to deal with large amounts of text so the tiny-chapter format you have here was one of the reasons I could keep reading (Yep, I had moments when I was truly intrigued by prologues of some stories, but couldn't finish 20k-word first chapters).

Secondly, It's fun. No, really! I did not see any real gore or grimdark stuff here (I have nothing against those, by the way), but that's a part of your style, I guess. Half of the whole demon invasion feels just silly (in a good, comedy way).

For me, this one is even better than "Ponies Play Doom", because Doom 3 was a part of my childhood, not 1 or 2 (nah, I even couldn't finish any of them because of damn level design. Call me a loser).

I feel that I must say something about story's cons, but I can't formulate any clear fault. May be, some moments are TOO silly like Bertruger covering his head with a pillow after being defeated, but to my mind - it's fine.

Good job!
(Sorry for any mistakes)

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Thank you so much for your kind words!

I was worried the darker elements would ultimately clash with the sillier ones, so I'm glad to hear that the story strikes a right balance for the most part. I was also worried the ending felt rushed, but it sounds like you enjoyed it.

Thanks again for reading my stories and helping with feedback. It means the world to me! :yay:

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