Lighting Ace
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8058556
Sorry I wil change it, right away, still new about the first second thing person
8058562
Oh I understand them, its only that sometimes I write so fast that I forget witch perspective I wrote something, its a weird thing, of mine.
So, in order to try and not commit the same error later on 'Third person is like god narrating a story'
'First person is using I and following a character like you point out'
Hmmm…and second person is…they and you never used I
Did I get them right?
8058614
Perfect, then I will keep it in mind for the future in later stories and chapters, thanks for pointing that mistake I really appreciate it
What about the real Shining Armour?
8060344
He is in the human body…how is doing? well…spoilers
rolf human 1 cadance 0
firedragon !!!! rolf
ho shing!!!
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teleport teleprt error eroorrr!!!!
human 1 cadance 1
Nice story m8 Keep up the great work.
8078939
Thanks I will try to keep posting new chapters as soon and as often as I can
Just a note on the title, and possibly through the fic as well since I haven't read it; Shining Armor is a proper noun, and therefore there is no "u" in Armor regardless of how you would spell the common noun.
8079053
Hey thanks, I have being having some problems with that, with the auto correct
8079053
There I correct the mistake, apologies if one or two are still there
What do you mean by that? If it's going to get dark, then just give the story a dark tag.
8079187
No, its not because of it getting dark, it because it might turn sexual. I'm not sure how much sexual and explicit it will get yet, so that is why the tag, better be safe than sorry right?
ho contraataque
vs 
human 2 cadance 1
orgasmos a la pony 25
8079832
Not yet, the score for now still tie, the human still hasn't made his move. And trust me it will be big
i waiting
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Now its Human 2 Cadence 1…
……and then turn into Human 2 Cadence 3…or 5 if you count each of the princess separately
danger danger !!!! will robison danger danger
next cap . twi and shing ?
8084567
Possible I'm still working on ideas, but maybe they will appear
long road to imperior cristal
aventure twilight and shining
and discord
yeiii
Next chapter after 15 or 20 but with more than 2000-5000 or more words plz, there is no problem waiting all
8089149
Je I will see what I can do
Well, they came to the empire, discord, lost their powers, cadance ... well do not you think that it is another person or pony in the body of shining .... so he is not putting the horn though he already has, and almost Does not look like he thinks Twilight, leave a little that you think, since what I understood Twi wants to go out with him, was the one who wanted to go out with Twi? And twi does not feel almost that interacts with them, feels more like a spectator, well waiting for how many more there will be, good watching the little hands down, it's a comedy story so you do not have to be faithful or follow the cannon , That there are some mistakes do not merit low finger if you do not have the decency to say that this is wrong or because, I think there are still some error but it does not remove the idea just polishing.
8094991
Thanks, I will keep it in mind and…yeah I will try to overcome the fear of going off the cannon, as well as polish more the stories, maybe find an editor for extra help if needed
When in doubt, frat party
Update on its way or is this put on a shelf for a while longer?
11350859
To be honest this was mostly an experiment but since there are readers wanting for more, and now that I have more experience I think I could give it an ending, with...7 or 8 chapters give or take.
Would you like to see how this ends?
11351553
Yeah, this is the most "Freaking Friday" parody ever.
Breaking the 4th Wall, Pinkie
Previous reminder:
Day Care(Earth Pony) and Carefree Planning(Unicorn)
Some more dating stories in the future?
Why hasn't he just told them who he is? I mean with Twilight and Discord in Ponyville it's not that unbelievable.
11619528
For the luls that or if discord really did mess with him there’s probably something preventing it.
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Is the real Shining Armor in Anonymous's body?
8060344
In time I hope we read Shining Armor's experience in Anonymous's body.
8066207
At least Twilight knows the situation. Why don't they let Spike send a letter to Cadence, Luna and/or Celestia, letting them know what happened? The letter will bypass the Windigoes and end up right above their heads.
Maybe they can talk to Luna in a dream and explain what happened.
Anonymous is starting to learn spells that Shining knew. This should be very helpful in his mission. Also who sent Shining a letter?
11351553
I think that since everything is out in the open now, Cadence can teach Anonymous everything he needs to know about how relationships work in Equestria, Anonymous and Celestia should get married and have a very happy marriage, and between the Mare 6, Discord, Shining and the 3 royal sisters they figure out how to switch everyone's minds back into their correct body.
I'll love to read more about their 1st date, and eventually their marriage. If you want to include sex scenes between Celestia and Anonymous, and other characters, it will make the story even more hot.