• Member Since 14th Oct, 2011
  • offline last seen Jul 21st, 2022

Your Antagonist


Shut up. Just write.

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Ahhhh... Daydreams, those brief escapes from the waking world into the realm of fantasy, where one's deepest desires roam rampant and unhindered, giving birth to vivid landscapes and scenarios so finite and fleeting in their magnificence. Let's see what's on the unconscious minds of Ponyville's various residents shall we, mon ami?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

More! More I say!

This is a great story, can't wait for chapter 2.

Oh god lol the ending.

oh lord have mercy. that ending, made me laugh so hard that i choked on my own spit. can't wait for more

This writing style is one of the finest I've read in a while, although I got the feeling Discord is narrating these, but maybe that's because I got reminded to Q, from Star Trek. :twilightblush:

Anyways, Favorited this and keep continuing with your work! Can't wait 'till Dashie gets her dream on! :rainbowdetermined2:

OMG! more! I can't stop laughing!!!!:rainbowlaugh: just that last image of spike hitting twilight with a newspaper :yay: :derpytongue2: great story! will definatly be waiting for more:moustache:

This story, I like it.

Another!

Oh, Spike, when will it work for you? On serious notes, I'm liking this. It fit perfectly with his daydreams from before, essentially being a sequel. The writing is laden with all the hallmarks of a save-the-princess story, and also grants some amusing imagery. Plus, Blueblood dual-wielding and firing sword beams. Classic. I can not wait for more.

This makes no sense.... I like it!

the blah blah blah, blah blah gemstones, blah blah blah Rarity, blah...

Okay what guy can't admit doing this before. Loved it. Spike won the heart of the fair lady Rarity! HUZZAH!

That ending, might keep me chucking all day.

That ending... :rainbowlaugh:

Are all the chapters (daydreams) going to be different genres? Not just adventure as was shown with Spike? So we can expect romance or comedy somewhere along the lines?

910982 Yessir, however updates will be few and far between since this is for lack of a better term: something I use to sharpen my writing blades between chapters. A practice ground if you will.

910990 If there's going to be more chapters, might I guide your eyes to the short description? I added this to "Read Later" and so far, the less-than-one-hundred-words description only says we're looking into Spike's incredibly entertaining dreams. Should it not extend to the others?

Damn you, Redblood.Capturing princesses' now? Coward.

I just have this picture of Spike hitting Twilight with a newspaper. It makes me smile. :pinkiehappy: Keep it up! :pinkiesmile:

Hehe!:rainbowlaugh: That was hilarious! Great work!:twilightsmile:

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