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meh, the whole thing was kind of boring, and I really had hope for this as un-birthing is one of my favorite things.
mehh its.. i dunno.. weird?
Is that it?
8048202 agreed, it feels...rushed i believe is the best word
Uh ok 1st the issues regarding discord is celestia's and Luna's fault seeing as they sealed him last and just turned him into a garden ornament. 2nd starlight stole the time spell while celestia's guards were on shift, so her fault. Twilight went back in time and corrected it over a dozen times. 3rd lets look at every major catastrophic event and villian all past issues Celestia and Luna used a temp fix to deal with. Or never informed twilight or her friends about.
Wow so Discord rules now, so how pain full will Celestia's death be.
lesson don't fail celestia class
Celestia wouldn't take the memory of her friends away... and if she still had plans for Twilight after everything, since I'm assuming she's not currently "ruling Ponyville" or running the school or being groomed to take over for Celestia some day, knowing Tia she'd put everything into temporary stasis until Twilight was ready. Again.
Despite what others have said, I myself enjoyed this quite a bit. While some of the text in the endings was repetitive and the explanation for Twilight's screw-ups was unnecessary, the clop itself seemed great. Ending 3 isn't something I think I've seen before, and I liked it a lot!