Wendy A Crescent
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and so it begins, can't wait for more of this, well done Wendy
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thank you i am glad you like it dear!
After reading other peoples Fallout: Equestria... I notice this one stands on top... Please don't ask I have no idea why.... This fiction is so good. Not sure why the prologue went very short, but chapter one through three catch my eye and boom it hit me.. Scarlet and Cherry thrown me off just a tiny bit for character development.
There are some small errors, but I really like where this is going so far.
Well, i'm hooked. Interested to see where this goes.
This Fo:E book has been advertised on my Fo:E group on facebook. https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/
Feel free to join us on there. We encourage self-promotion, bragging and gushing about your own or other people's fics. Great place to hang out and make friends. :)
"war never changes"
actually, that's not entirely true. every new weapon, and some other inventions (like Radios) have changed war.
So I forgot to leave a comment when I read this initially, and here's one now!
I am not very familiar with the FO:E setting and its technology/characters. I also have little to no knowledge of the games, so I was certainly going in a bit blind here. I know a little about the worldbuilding and more pony-centric elements in concept. The things you had in here to help this story standalone from the main one were very nice, and the setting was able to be grasped by some level - I've read enough dystopian fiction to pick up on those elements.
The character focused drama and darker elements were both handled in a way that was interesting. However, the adventure and story ended exactly where it felt like something even more engaging was about to begin. Still, a nice little story on its own.
The first person narration was very fun! First person POV is incredibly hard for me to find on this site, and well-written stuff is even harder. I'm not sure if its a staple of the FO:E universe/style or what, but hooray for there be decently done first person!
All your OCs in here, while not my favorite, were still distinguishable and memorable as yours. They added to the story. I'm not sure if this was just me, or something - again - related to FO:E that I simply didn't know about, but there seemed like there was a lot of almost flirty/somewhat flirty dialogue between Cherry, Autumn, and Scarlet and I wasn't sure why this was added. Foreshadowing for... something perhaps? It was a detail that I wasn't sure about. I could be misreading things, so correct me if I'm wrong!
Your prose and pacing were fine, and this ended up being much lighter reading than I anticipated, helped in part by the flow of your sentences. Nice job! I've only sampled a little bit of your work, but this was certainly a nice adventure story/prologue/thing.