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Dandereshy


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Needs custom coverart!

The Count of Romaneia hasn't ruled very long since his father fell ill and he was given temporary control, which is unhelpful to the fact that he has nopony to keep him company - no true friends, no lover, no family to actually spend time with.

To worsen the problem, ponies in his kingdom seem to be having issues. After his father's illness began, the town has grown slowly quiet. Despite his best efforts to uncover the cause, Count Onyx Dawn always comes up empty-hooved. So, he reaches out to the only pony who he knows can help him: Princess Celestia.

Upon hearing an old friend's problems, the Princess sends the best ponies for the job his way: The Elements of Harmony.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 16 )

While I am incapacitated, you are to watch over the throne. You will not attain the title of king, however."

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It's Elements of Harmony. Why do you want to change the cover art? It looks fine to me.

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I specifically designed a castle in Minecraft I wanted drawn as the coverart. The castle is actually what I designed for this story.

Not a bad start. The description of the premise seems interesting, inciting incident of the king being ill and his son having to step in is a classic move. Aside from some wording choices this is a solid start. Tracking!

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Sweet! I hope to continue to pique your interest.

You should make an audio drama out of this

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Yeah, I agree. Unfortunately, I can't find someone to do a coverart for me. :twilightsheepish:

Didn't this story used to have more chapters?

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Mmmm, no. I don't think so.

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