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Twilight loves all her friends, but lately a certain pink pony has been occupying her mind a bit more than usual: thankfully, she knows to keep such feelings to herself.

...So why has that mare been giggling everytime she passes by?

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Hehehehe. This is funny!


Good, aorable story referencing another good, adorable story!

Traitorous wings! :twilightblush:

what a great story! this was one fun read!well done to you on a finr story.

I feel betrayed.

There were no Twinkies in this story.

In all seriousness, though, great little fic. Have a like. :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Bonus points for the alliteration.

Puzzling pink pecks on a purple royal princess, she later found out she had gotten pony aids and pony herpes... Today is sad day

Twinkie; the most deliciously named ship

This is the second Twinkie-ship story I've read recently, and I gotta say, I'm starting to come around a little bit. This was a very well done fic, good pacing, good interactions, and very fun.

That was a cute story. Oblivious Twilight is simply adorable.

I am no fan of this ship and I am certainly no fan of Pinkie's but this story was adorable. :twilightsmile:
Though I do wonder where Spike and Starlight Glimmer were while this was happening? :moustache:


Twilight smiled at Pinkie, somewhat sheepishly, as she let the bouncing pony pull her over to their seats. They weren't the best seats in the house, but Twilight was finding she didn't really care--even if the date didn't work out so well, it was fun to spend time with a friend, after all.

The two of them settled into their respective seats--Twilight a bit carefully, since she had to mind her wings now--and got ready to watch the cirque.

Then Twilight gasped out loud, as a sudden thought popped into her head. "Oh no!"

"What is it, Twilight?" Pinkie said, nervously half smiling, shifting into a half frown and back as she obviously worried over what she had done wrong.

"Pinkie!" Twilight cried, grasping her friend by her shoulders. "I forgot to pick up Spike and Starlight from the train station!"


Starlight wrapped her foreleg around Spike and huddled close as she looked out over the snowy, flurrying conditions. Not because he was cold, but because Spike was proving to be an excellent space heater. "I would have thought she'd have come around by now. Spike... I think Twilight forgot to pick us up!"

"Meh," Spike said, wiggling his arm out so he could turn the page of the comic he was reading. "Wouldn't be the first time."

I'm pretty sure this story is set before the library was destroyed by Tirek, so It would just be Spike. No Starlight Glimmer.

This is a cute story. And Twilight doesn't even realize Pinkie likes it when she does that

In Dragonshy Twilight didn't even bat an eye at hitting Fluttershy in the butt with her head. Still, it is fun pretending ponies feel the same way about that as humans!

My only complaint: You mentioned the cutie mark twice, and the flank is more like the hip, so it doesn't quite have the same effect.

Congratulations, you are officially my 1000th favourited fic on this site! :yay:

Pretty decent Twipie!

Have a cookie.

It's pretty common in the fandom to associate the side/hip of a pony with its butt. Technically they're not the same, but I can assure you that if you grabbed a woman be the side of her hip rather than directly on her buttock, she's still slap you.

8049579 Yay!

That explains it, though it raises the question as to why they'd choose that area for something like a cutie mark.

I thought I recognized that quoted section.

Omg, this story is so ridiculously cute! :heart: :heart:

The wingboner has evolved. Canon accepted, and ship sailed.

T'was cute and well written. Needed more ass slapping, though.


I think I liked "them flipper flappers" better :rainbowlaugh:

I reviewed this story as part of Read It Now Reviews #107.

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Kind of wish there was a way to hide certain users' comments on stories.

“Showing you I’m interested too, duh,” Pinkie said with a roll of her eyes. “You’re a very silly filly sometimes, Twilight!.” She paused and spat out the duster into her hoof

A couple things here:
a) Wouldn't her talk be somewhat garbled because she's holding something in her mouth?
b) Did the author just put a full-stop (or period) after an exclamation mark? That's not at all right - either go with the full-stop or the exclamation mark, not both.

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