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one small thing,
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Eagerly waiting the next chapter
You should warning that it is falcon.
Nice chapter, but I found a couple minor things.
That should be "heart".
And that should be capitalised.
8068852 Story does not contain falcons.
Honestly, I've been debating with myself as to whether this counts as foalcon.
How dark? Is he raping her, most of the time it's consensual between the two
8068906 That's for a later chapter, mon ami.
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Blue falcon?
I am reminded of Dostoevsky's Дети и Отцы.
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Au contraire, garcon, I think the meat of the story has indeed come.
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14 is not 18 or 21.
8069192 The age of consent in Germany is 13. So... it's pretty arbitrary.
Also they are fictional cartoon horses.
Stop! I can feel it in the air, something ... something GLORIOUS HA, HA HA HA HA
8069359 I was going to say that. I frankly don't know what the ideal age of consent would be, because everyone's different, but I think 18 is too high. 21, now that's just ridiculous. I'm also not sure why there's the rule for humans and anthro that doesn't apply to horse. Not even sure why it applies to anthro. I mean, you have something that's not even real!
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The idea of consent changed when the idea of teenagers became prominent. You were either a child or an adult; there was no middle ground. This did not occur centuries ago.
It was during the 1940s.
To me, and I speak of no one other than me, age of consent can be lower than 21 or 18, because these are cartoon horses and a lot of human mores and taboos are irrelevant. And useless, as these are cartoon characters.
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The age of puberty was also higher centuries ago. 15 years old to start puberty was once typical, now 10 years old is not unusual.
I'm of the opinion that laws that give wiggle room in the teen years are doing it right. A 14 year old with a 30 year old is creepy and probably abusive, even if both parties assert otherwise at the time. A 14 year old with a 14 year old more likely healthy exploration of changes and emotional expression. Where I live says age of consent for everyone is 18; age of consent for everyone except those in a position of responsibility over the teen (their teacher for example) is 16; and minimum age of consent is 12 so long as participants are within two year of each other (12 and 14, yes. 10 and 12, no. 15 and 18, no).
Freaks
8068534 it seems like a mistake but with proper wording it could mean to scar someone, you know, scarred for life etc.
8071277 That's what I meant, yeah. Fixed it, since I assumed that's what he was referring to.
8071277 I considered that too, but you're right. It was just the way it was worded.
8071316 That was the only nit I could pick, so, bravo. Very well-written.
Damn, next chapter please?
Always, love Sparkle incest with Shining and Velvet.
I could have sworn I've read this exact a last year ago on Fanfiction. Almost positive.
8077178 I think there was a fic where Shining Armor got jerked off by a lady doctor in the first chapter. Can't remember its name. I remember the context and general content of the fic being quite different, tho. This is going a while back.
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Update?
great chapter
What you did there.. I see it
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Posted more. Time to read.
And now I've faved it. What have you done?
Well... That escalated quickly
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You stole my line, but not my gif.
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More? o[o
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I go looking in the comments of a Shining/Velvet incest fic out of curiosity and then suddenly there's Osaka's face looking out at me from beneath the authors name. That was just bizarre, had a good startled laugh from that alone.
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Comments....i get ya....
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It's actually as I said. Only just came back, hurhur, and read the story now. It was pretty good. Although I'll admit I was surprised by this accidental succubus Velvet. Neat twist.
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Going back a few years, but I remember it, too. Cadence In A Minor, by Isseus. That one went to some dark places.
8180504 That's da one! Holy crap it's long. (Please take that out of context. Also read this in Osaka's English dub voice.) I only remember reading the first chapter.
At first, i thought it was that one condition that makes it so there's too much blood flowing into one nut, making it more enlarged than normal. It was a reasonable explanation, as 10% of men have this condition. However, it was just not enough sexual release. Can't say I'm disappointed.
I am kind of confused by this 'ending'
This makes it seem like it has a dark tag cause velvet stole shining a youth, this is so confusing and uncertain
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basically, Velvet is literally stealing the 'youth' of ponies, she may not realize it, but she is now in a never ending loop of taking time away from other ponies' lives.
Huh, what do you know, I was right about what happened to Velvet. Spoopy. Neat ending.
8190567 Thank you for noticing the twist in the previous chapter, since apparently the ending took some people off guard—and not in a good way. I suspect the usage of the Dark tag ended up being quite different from what was expected. I've been experimenting with working themes into clop, and I can't say I'm all that pleased with how this one turned out. It's left kind of ambiguous as to whether Velvet is aware that she literally steals youth from the colts she seduces, but she at least has this idea in her head that they stop her from feeling old. Now, being old and feeling old are two different things, and it turns out that in the present day Velvet actually looks younger than she did at the beginning. Her body has almost become like a time machine that requires a specific trigger. It's a bit esoteric. I do, however, plan on writing a kind of spiritual successor to this fic where the colt-mare dynamic is a much healthier relationship; I hope to get started on that soon. It will be considerably lighter in mood, but with a sci-fi edge that I've been wanting to implement, combining one of my fetishes (young guy-older woman) with my favorite genre.
(I'm sorry for the wall of text.
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Stealing youth? Huh. I guess the dark tag was appropriate. RIP boner.
An interesting premise to be sure. Have a like.
I'm probably drunk but
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH
Sheiat
Stealing Youth through sex? Welp. I knew Night Light had a good eye for mares, but nabbing a succubus as his wife is one hell of a move.
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Not that much more than the title was referenced. Chatterly's lover was a gamekeeper, not a duke.