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TheNewYorkBrony
The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.
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What if Sunset use her powers stealthy on the Sirens?
Oh wow!
Why am I surprised at this point?
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I doubt Sunset can handle the sexual Fantasies of three women who have been alive for over 1000 years and have likely seen and experienced almost everything you can think of
8131727 she'd likely die. or orgasm. or both.
8131733
Likely both.
8131733 Sounds and smells like she's chicken.
Ok, this NEEDS a sequel!
AYE AYE CAPTAIN DASHIE!
if she touches two people at the same time, would their fantasies merge?
8131844 Whoa. never thought of that.
Wow, zero "aye, aye, captian Dashie!" comments?
I laughed silently causing me to laugh longer and harder as i continued reading but because i was silently laughing it hurt so now i am in pain.
Aye, aye, captain dashie
aye, aye, captian Dashie!
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If the Fantasies of one Dazzling couldn't kill her, two definitely would.
Freakin' hilarious!
Poor Sunset! By the end of this her eyes must have been rolling so much she must have wondered if they'd ever stop!
Top shelf, good chap! Have a cookie!
OMG what if Sunset was the last hand in a team break?
Aye Aye Capt'n Dashite, Terror of the technicolor seas!
Full speed ahead!
Man, and what could have been a really great series of clopfics about how Sunset helped her girls go through their sexual fantasies and apprehension has devoted to a few jokes.
Fic was good. Just dissapointed at the loss of potential.
And in the corner of the shop, there sat an individual, pastry in hand but attention focused on the scene that just played out.
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aye aye dashie
I'd like to die from Cancer now...
aye, aye, captian Dashie
8132310 Hoist the mainsails! The ships be a-sailin' cap'n!
Aye Aye Captain Dash.
Also, I agree with one of the previous comments. Maybe a story where Sunset helps them all with desires they'd otherwise kept suppressed. And of course... she writes to pony Twilight.
And we get a few bonus chapters involving pony Twi. Starlight and maybe Luna and Celestia.
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That ending was hilarious.
8132336 well theres always a chance for a bonus chapter or a sequel
Damn' I got a shit eating grin now from fluttershy blurting it out and sunsets comment lol
Aye, aye, captian Dashie!, So much aye aye
Is this some Raridash I smell in the water?
aye, aye, captian Dashie!
There was an amusing half-giggle or two in here, but I felt the story failed to do anything with the premise. Like, the Twilight scene was fine, but then suddenly it's all her friends grabbing her hand and somehow the rest all know what Sunset sees despite there being nothing in the story to indicate how that happens. Are they all sharing the visions? Is Sunset telling them? Is the girl who is touched? It's not touched on, but suddenly everyone knows, and I don't know how they know. A simple line like 'After Sunset finished explaining, if only to shut everyone else up' right before Pinkie does her thing would have solved that.
And then we just have lightning whiplash between 'Here is how the girls want it in cliche porn scripts' and I felt my attention slipping, and then poof, it ended!
This does have an intriguing premise, but the execution just didn't live up to it, for me as a reader.
Man, really wish she would've done AJ's fantasy
So like, was Sunset narrating this out to the others? How did they know what was being seen?
It would've been funny if AJ didn't actually fantasize about SS, but tried to come up with something so that she'd fit in
"This sexual intercouse sure is mighty fine. Ah do like havin' lesbian sex with Sunset Shimmer, because she is hotter than guys whom ah don't like because ah have fantasies about Sunset Shimmer, whih are being indulged right now in mah imagination."
Ahahah, funny as hell!
Aye, aye, captain Dashie!
So everyone wants to do Sunset Shimmer? That has potential for a cloppy sequel!
8132805 haha that's freaking hilarious
There. Now on with the orgy.
They're just jealous because they want some snu-snu as well.
It's only a power if you are able to turn it off when you need it. If you can't not use it at will it can turn into a curse. And get you into awkward situations.
Still, a fun little story. Shy... It's always the quiet ones, isn't it?
I would love to see you Rainbow Dash fantasy with the referee play out
More like "ai-yi-yi-yi, Captain Dashie".
Of course, they can always write it up and make a mint from all those people who bought Fifty Shades of Neigh, thereby securing college funds for everyone.
Missing a space before Pinkie, and no capital she
*She
Capital
No capital
Can't I just copy/paste instead? Also, *Captain
Feels like there's so much wasted potential. Like this is basically the short-handed notes you expand into a proper piece. You could have done so much more with the premise and what you did do just feels so lacklustre.
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Like the others said, good story but I can't help but feel there was a bit more you could've done. I also kinda don't like how all the mane six like Sunset. I mean, It's possible, but ehh.
As Alucard would Say SWEET BLACK FUCKING SABBATH! DAMN!