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Equestria Ghouls

As White Wave tries to protect Twilight from Ace, he tries to wake up and elevated a plank which cause for thousands of metal to fall on him.
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This was inspired by an anime Tokyo Ghoul.
This was also inspired by fanfic "equestria ghoul" written by the-great-grey. Hope you enjoy and have a nice day.

Chapters (3)

Chapter 1: The Date · 4th Jun 2017 · 914 words
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Chapter 2 : A date went horribly wrong. · 4th Jun 2017 · 411 words
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The Fight · 15th Sep 2017 · 262 words
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ElementBrigade

ElementBrigade #1 · Sep 15th, 2017 · · · The Fight ·

Um, not wanting to be rude seeing how this is your first story, but this really needs a lot of work done on it. You keep switching from POV to many times in the first chapter which is kind of putting me off, the chapters are a too short, and it seems a bit rushed from what I can tell.

Endergirl260

Endergirl260 #2 · Sep 15th, 2017 · · · The Fight ·

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I know right this fanfic was a bit rushed. In the first chapter I don't really read through the whole chapter before submitting it. I think I'll edit that later... Btw thanks for pointing out some errors in my story..

ElementBrigade