I swear I fall in love with this story more and more with each chapter update. The parent's personality was great and I love that her first name is violet. Though I do feel really bad for Harshwinny cause of her past hopefully everything works out in this relationship. Keep up the awesome work.
Wheeeeeew, what a chapter, damn. Gaaaaah I love it so much, I never thought I'd enjoy something with Harshwinny in it in a million years, and this is a treat~
So they cuddled for like ten minutes before breaking off and sleeping because all couples know that sleeping in each others arms is sweaty and hot as fuck.
Okay, I have to admit, I have not expected her first name to come out like this But hey, we finally know the first name! Yay!
So, our protagonist has the father's approval. And it would seem like the mother's as well, as Violet didn't say anything negative from her mom's side. So, win? I'd consider that as a win.
And yay, cuddle time! Cuddles are awesome. Even the manliest of men will agree with that.
“Oh, don’t be so dramatic sweetie.” he looks back at me “I used to be a Detective for the Manehattan Police Department. If you feel that I’m getting too personal, feel free to let me know.” I answer him with a nod, as I have a mouth full of salad. “So, tell me, how is the fearsome Ms. Harshwhinny as a boss?”
Oh boy...
dis gon b guuuuuuuuud
“I never could keep anything from them, especially Dad." she scoffs "Silly of me to think I could hide something from a former detective.”
Just then, Slewhoof comes out, with a mare close behind him, carrying a massive bowl full of cobb salad. It looks delicious. It’s got chopped hard boiled eggs, cheese, tomatoes, avocado, corn and tofu.
I Threw my fucking phone.... After reading through my emails I notice a certain "Love is Harsh" Updated.... I Threw my phone and ran to my computer... God #&(*@&!!!
Breezy, it's been a while. I don't think I've commented on one of your stories since she's having a foal first came out. But a quick reminder, I love your work.
“That’s why I brought him here. I finally got a good assistant.” Ms. Harshwhinny laughs with such cuteness, that I’m just about close to grabbing her and kissing her. Keep control of yourself, man!
I know this is still a fresh and interessting relationship for them, but this feels like you overdo it a little bit with him freaking out if he doesn't get's his hug and kiss every two minutes.
“How long has this been going on?” he asks in a calm manner, but his eyes still intimidate the hell out of me.
“About a month.” I admit to him. “We’ve been together since Hearts and Hooves Day.”
While I admit it was kind of clear that they are together, I sometimes think that this doesn'T has to be the first thing for parents to admit, I'm just not one that would just assume something without being sure. I hate to assume stuff and accuse people of stuff. I'm however a bit dissapointed that he caved in so soon.
He said that in such a cold tone, that I have no choice but to freeze up at his utterance. I’m no slouch, but he looks like the kind of stallion that could break my spine by just stepping on it with little force on his end.
I would have prefered if he would have gotten serious instead of fearing to be killed. Maybe I'm just a little bit different in such situations, even if I have my own weak moments, but this is just odd to me sometimes. To be honest I maybe only got a bit tired of having a kind of scared and wimpy main char sometimes if you know what I mean.
“That’s not the point. I should be the more mature one. A mare in my position needs to handle situations with delicate care, but you…you’ve made me…” she’s struggling to get the next word out, until… “…unprofessional.”
I'm not forgetting what people usually believe, but the whole talk about "be more mature and stuff like that when I hear it being either said to me or others, I can't hear it anymore. I mean who is telling you how you can act like and what you aren't allowed to be like?
We get to the end of the street, where Ms. Harshwhinny parks in the driveway of a brown, two story house, with an olive tree in the front, and a small flower garden by the porch.
Him still using "Ms." even during his internal conversations at this point of their relationship is a bit immersion breaking imo... its like that barrier of "distanced professionalism" has never been broken. But I guess that's just me... I do understand why you would write it this way (being that the "Ms." on her Harshwhinny name is such an integral part of her character and notability) but it still bother's me a bit.
I always figured that she had a first name, but she has been known as Ms. Harshwhinny for some time, that I even briefly thought her name was just Ms.
Interesting admission, this bit makes it less immersion breaking.
Also... Violet? Damn 😂 It fits i guess.
“That’s not the point. I should be the more mature one. A mare in my position needs to handle situations with delicate care, but you…you’ve made me…” she’s struggling to get the next word out, until… “…unprofessional.”
Hnngggggg 😂
Comment posted by EbonHaste deleted Sep 29th, 2020
Really?
Well... mission accomplished, I guess. I'm content with the resolution of the first name issue.
I think you mean "On cue," here.
This was a cute chapter. I love the parents and Violet is such a cute name~
Keep up the amazing work~
Im suprised Dad didnt have the big notice board marked up with half his backstory.
After all, any long lived cop who is real good, has freinds on the other side.
This is so cute :3
a awesome chapter i can feel the love in it.
I swear I fall in love with this story more and more with each chapter update. The parent's personality was great and I love that her first name is violet. Though I do feel really bad for Harshwinny cause of her past hopefully everything works out in this relationship. Keep up the awesome work.
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Preach! You have said my thought on this story to the letter. I too love this story and I wa overjoyed that it updated.
Wheeeeeew, what a chapter, damn. Gaaaaah I love it so much, I never thought I'd enjoy something with Harshwinny in it in a million years, and this is a treat~
Good show!
So they cuddled for like ten minutes before breaking off and sleeping because all couples know that sleeping in each others arms is sweaty and hot as fuck.
Okay, I have to admit, I have not expected her first name to come out like this
But hey, we finally know the first name! Yay!
So, our protagonist has the father's approval. And it would seem like the mother's as well, as Violet didn't say anything negative from her mom's side. So, win? I'd consider that as a win.
And yay, cuddle time! Cuddles are awesome. Even the manliest of men will agree with that.
Oh boy...
dis gon b guuuuuuuuud
hehehe
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Just say the word, my Lord, and those who have wronged Violet Harshwhinny shall pay for their sins... with blood.
8406569 of course they would, cuddling with your woman is what a man does.
Damn.
gosh darn i love this too much.
I Threw my fucking phone.... After reading through my emails I notice a certain "Love is Harsh" Updated.... I Threw my phone and ran to my computer... God #&(*@&!!!
>Falafels
Good man
mmmMmm... This remains a very solid romance. Thank you for continuing this.
I look forward to the harsh marriage.
The wait is so worth it...
Breezy, it's been a while. I don't think I've commented on one of your stories since she's having a foal first came out. But a quick reminder, I love your work.
Great!
I know this is still a fresh and interessting relationship for them, but this feels like you overdo it a little bit with him freaking out if he doesn't get's his hug and kiss every two minutes.
While I admit it was kind of clear that they are together, I sometimes think that this doesn'T has to be the first thing for parents to admit, I'm just not one that would just assume something without being sure. I hate to assume stuff and accuse people of stuff.
I'm however a bit dissapointed that he caved in so soon.
I would have prefered if he would have gotten serious instead of fearing to be killed. Maybe I'm just a little bit different in such situations, even if I have my own weak moments, but this is just odd to me sometimes.
To be honest I maybe only got a bit tired of having a kind of scared and wimpy main char sometimes if you know what I mean.
I'm not forgetting what people usually believe, but the whole talk about "be more mature and stuff like that when I hear it being either said to me or others, I can't hear it anymore. I mean who is telling you how you can act like and what you aren't allowed to be like?
“If…for whatever reason…this doesn’t work out…it has to be amicable. If you break her heart, I’ll break a chair over your head. Deal?”
Chair huh old habits die hard don't they Maxbeezy?
I hoped for wild passionate love making or detailed cuddels Great chapter
Him still using "Ms." even during his internal conversations at this point of their relationship is a bit immersion breaking imo... its like that barrier of "distanced professionalism" has never been broken. But I guess that's just me... I do understand why you would write it this way (being that the "Ms." on her Harshwhinny name is such an integral part of her character and notability) but it still bother's me a bit.
Interesting admission, this bit makes it less immersion breaking.
Also... Violet? Damn 😂 It fits i guess.
Hnngggggg 😂