Okay now this was a great chapter, too bad they couldn't keep going all the way in the Sauna, also when will the two start dating in the open or when will he propose to her?
Let it never be said that Ms. Harshwhinny never returns a favour. And indeed, Kevin, if only you knew. Hell, this may even make Ms. Harshwhinny ease on some of the rules about fraternization - as long as it doesn't affect anyone's results or you're not taking advantage of anyone, why not?
I love this story. Minor nitpick: It’s a pretty spacious room, with the steaming coals in the center. The rocks in a sauna are not coals, at least they shouldn't be (I hope this isn't some crazy american thing). Source: am a swedish guy, married to a finnish woman. Saunas are quite popular here in Sweden (we have one in our basement), and in Finland the Art of the Sauna is basically state religion :) For those that didn't know: "sauna" is an actual Finnish word that has made its way into several languages, much like the Swedish words "smorgasbord" and "ombudsman".
Oh, and I can personally guarantee that it is fully possible to have sex in a sauna without making a mess.
Every time I see her cold exterior break, making way to this nervous mare, I can’t deny how cute of a sight it is. To be the only one to see her like this is a joy, and it only makes her serious side when we are working together even more desirable.
It is cute and especially nice to see that this isn'T happening to the main char again. I probably said that a lot already right?
This looks perfect, I hope that if the story ends soon, you maybe do a sequel and kind of include other characters a bit more as well or I don't know add an adoption or something. I like those stories that focus on two characters, but once in a while you wish for soemthing else too.
However be sure that I really mean it when I say I love it. I can probably always find something to complain if I want to, but this impressed me since I'm pretty rarely that okay with a story lately.
Steamy chapter.
Ba-dum-tss
Second?...
Heeheehee, this... this was goooood~ Sauna fun times are some epic fun times to read.
Specially if it involves the masseuse gettin' frisky~
Good show!
So, with being able to directly call on Aloe and Lotus,
Its Harsh Words In Ponyville?
You know, after all that hot and steamy, maybe something to cool down with.
If its cheap enough, maybe an icecream cone? even a 69?
Can we get a chapter set in Harshwhinny's hippie youth titled "Harshing my Mellow"?
Man, It's like watching porn with better actors who care. Nice job, yo.
I'm sorry, I can't seem to see the rest of the chapter with this MASSIVE RED FLAG IN THE WAY
Great chapter though.
Okay now this was a great chapter, too bad they couldn't keep going all the way in the Sauna, also when will the two start dating in the open or when will he propose to her?
Let it never be said that Ms. Harshwhinny never returns a favour.
And indeed, Kevin, if only you knew. Hell, this may even make Ms. Harshwhinny ease on some of the rules about fraternization - as long as it doesn't affect anyone's results or you're not taking advantage of anyone, why not?
Dayum, man.
I sometimes wish you'd draw out the sex a bit more, but for the most part what you do put out is very nice indeed.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I mean, he's probably up there with the greats in terms of assistance. He's probably peaked in potential somewhere along the line...
A fright train sounds scary, but I think you meant 'freight' train.
I love this story.
Minor nitpick:
It’s a pretty spacious room, with the steaming coals in the center.
The rocks in a sauna are not coals, at least they shouldn't be (I hope this isn't some crazy american thing).
Source: am a swedish guy, married to a finnish woman. Saunas are quite popular here in Sweden (we have one in our basement), and in Finland the Art of the Sauna is basically state religion :)
For those that didn't know: "sauna" is an actual Finnish word that has made its way into several languages, much like the Swedish words "smorgasbord" and "ombudsman".
Oh, and I can personally guarantee that it is fully possible to have sex in a sauna without making a mess.
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You're right. That was a mistake on my part. Thanks for the spot. It's been corrected.
8355937 I thought they were called coals because they look vaguely like coals. If they were, people would be dying.
Whatever happens in Swedish Saunas, hopefully stays in it.
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DAMN IT, YOU BEAT ME TO IT
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Where there is a will there is a way. All you have to do is travel back in time and you can be first! lol
It is cute and especially nice to see that this isn'T happening to the main char again. I probably said that a lot already right?
This looks perfect, I hope that if the story ends soon, you maybe do a sequel and kind of include other characters a bit more as well or I don't know add an adoption or something.
I like those stories that focus on two characters, but once in a while you wish for soemthing else too.
However be sure that I really mean it when I say I love it. I can probably always find something to complain if I want to, but this impressed me since I'm pretty rarely that okay with a story lately.
That legit made me chuckle. Nice writing!
Thanks for the service