Starlight asks Trixie to tickle her and Trixie plans to tie her up and tickle her hooves.
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damn Yoshi back at it again with the stilted self-appealing dialogue
Your style here reminds me of Evictus, which is why I experienced a cold shiver followed immediately by a tremor in the Force.
This is mainly for you being Evictus's whore
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8162314 That's so messed up but funny
8164033 I know, but it is quite obvious that both he and Evictus deliver very comparable pieces of crappy content on here; and I swear they're conspiring to troll the hell out of this site
. Of course, it's quite clear to me that they're both on the same level of the Autism Spectrum scale... and I honestly wish I could be sympathetic and understanding. However I just can't because they don't seem to be willing to learn anything from us when we give helpful feedback. Evictus keeps making up excuses and Yoshi hardly ever replies to feedback: helpful or hateful.
If they wish to be in their own little worlds, it's tolerable. But it's probably best if they keep it to themselves and not share it on here
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Well the story itself is good but I think it is your style that has brought the downvotes. Oh, and I think it would be far better if Starlight and Trixie were friends with benefits, many, many benefits! I say you should write a sequel that would be rated M.